Completed my task.. Excited now!!
@AnthOcean (407)
June 11, 2017 1:54am CST
After a day night work of almost a week with my friends i got my poem completed and got it on youtube too.
I am told the video is great with deep words.
Here it is for you everybody.
i hope you would like it too.
I need advises as well for the next video work. What shall i bring in? what should it look like? please keep me suggesting.
this is the poem of a heart telling its feelings and senses when it came to know it has been taken by a Demon. It says the heart's prayer within the sufferin...
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@AnthOcean (407)
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12 Jun 17
Thank you so much for watching and giving me the feed back. I need one more favor, would you share it to your contacts..? i need more views.
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@Nawsheen (28643)
• Mauritius
12 Jun 17
@AnthOcean i will share it on facebook. ok
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@atoz1to10 (6780)
• Australia
21 Jun 17
I like the music and the pictures... but it looks so ....scary for me..
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@AnthOcean (407)
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24 Jun 17
seems like the demon did its work, scared you Well thanks that you watched it.
further if possible please share the link with your contacts.
@innertalks (22093)
• Australia
19 Jun 17
It is a very meaningful poem.
I had to read the lines a couple of times, as at first reading, some lines seemed to have typos in them. But on a second reading, I see that the words are deep and are probably as you wrote them to be, after all.
"It kept me ruining and ruining till the end"
I thought this might have been meant to be running and running, but I see the deeper point you are making here too. It really does keep ruining us till the end...
@AnthOcean (407)
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21 Jun 17
Glad to know this. . you have taken the poem so thoroughly. The feedback you gave is really very honest. And i like it. i wanted to know how you felt about the poem and you said it.
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