IN HIM
@Humitex (171)
United States
July 22, 2017 6:14am CST
This is not a puzzle,
I will give HIM everything,
Take this as a warning,
I already I’m strange.
I’m cut from a different cloth,
Can’t explain my DNA,
Yes, you better call a medic,
This is an emergency.
I’ve busted out of the box,
I’ve broken all the logs,
Even escaping all the routine of the religious headlines,
Sleeping like, wait,
This is different,
He must be a reverend,
This doesn't sound like gospel,
It must be the Devil.
But, check I’m laying bricks,
I’m following his blueprint,
So, if you have a problem,
Just blame Him that I’m a misfit.
See, we have to abandon all we have carnally known to be true,
Stop altering the scriptures to find a better fit for you.
You candy –coat the truth,
Just like EMINEM,
Melt in your mouth, then,
You try to fire it in the end.
You steak with the lies,
And you think it all gravy,
So what,
You think you’re getting ‘A’,
Because you're perplexed in playing hate.
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@shikharava (1838)
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22 Jul 17
A very good poem, indeed. You bring out the elements of human struggle so beautifully. Good work. and keep it up. See ya :)
@shikharava (1838)
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22 Jul 17
@Humitex yes, my friend. It is not an easy thing to bring out struggles and emotions in such simple and yet effective language. Not everyone can do it. I say, you need to experience more of your life and bring out what gives you joy. You need to experience everything, then only can you understand humanity, their weaknesses and their strengths. Wishing you all the luck and success. Have a nice day, my friend. And keep writing.
