Poetry Challenge: Tombe
By Lindsey
@Pennicash (12)
United States
August 12, 2017 9:03am CST
Provoked into action by Jekca!
Rules are as follows, write a poem in any style using the five words that [she] give[s] you. Write it in one sitting or in under an hour (only to quash your inner editor, rules are loose there). Add it here, OR link in a comment so we can enjoy each other's poems. The words can be in any plurality or tense.
Today’s words are: need, courage, passion, strength, dance
PASSION: TOMBE
Once I knew the dance
And with the grace of Pavlova,
The strength of Baryshnikov,
And courage of the four-year old
Clinging to the barre,
I leapt through time and space.
I froze life, hovering mid-air.
I balanced on tip-toe, poised
And controlled,
Just waiting to be captured.
Long ago, the grace fell.
The strength grew weak.
The courage faltered.
Incomplete the days have been
Since a sashay or pirouette saved
From long and bitter nights.
I need to find that pulse again—
That life’s blood rhythm of the soul.
To arabesque and entrechat
From one heart’s beat to the next
Grand jete.
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4 responses
@Pennicash (12)
• United States
12 Aug 17
Ohhh I was going to name it Passion at first. Then switched to Tombre. Well, I'm a rebel, anyway, so...yeah! Thanks for stopping in and commenting!
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@sishy7 (27167)
• Australia
12 Aug 17
@Pennicash No worries... I really do enjoy your poem. I took ballet growing up until well into my late teen, so the words and the whole poem took me back down memory lanes some...
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@hereandthere (45645)
• Philippines
14 Aug 17
@sishy7 i didn't know you were a ballet dancer. why did you stop?
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@RasmaSandra (79929)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
12 Aug 17
Really nice. Enjoyed this.
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@Pennicash (12)
• United States
12 Aug 17
Thanks so much for stopping by and commenting. :)
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
12 Aug 17
I totally and utterly love this one, and I am SO glad the poking got you to POST this!!!
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@Jessicalynnt (50523)
• Centralia, Missouri
13 Aug 17
@Pennicash I am quite glad I did, this place can fun, and the fact you make a few pennies while having fun is worthwhile.
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