do u like poems
By maryulismax
@maryulismax (1437)
Indonesia
98 responses
@frnds4ever (470)
• India
27 Nov 06
i love poems i like to write also how did u find this one
I am a dream...
Neither what i pretend
nor what i seem,
i am a mere dream..
With layers to be scratched,
cryptic meanings;all painted
in a blurred vision...
Loved or loathed,
a feeling of nostalgia
often forgotten,
i cant be held
i am a mere dream...
A drop of tear,
an unfulfilled wish,
a tale of unrequitted love,
a wild fantasy,
a hope to cing...
with stars
i will perish in dark,
dawn will never come;i have got a short life,
i will have to die,
even before i come alive..
i am a mere dream.
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@santosh4813 (493)
• India
28 Nov 06
yes I do like poems. But i never tried to creat any poem.
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@santosh4813 (493)
• India
28 Nov 06
yes I do like poems. But i never tried to creat any poem.
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@raj0019 (2623)
• Argentina
29 Nov 06
yes i do like...here is one
This poem is dedicated to my LOVE
I live through my dark existence
only to bask in your beauty
your eyes that shine like sapphires
your smile that brightens even my sad existence
I envy the wind that runs through your hair
that touches your lips
I long to touch you
to hold you in my arms but I cannot
for your heart belongs to another
so, I can only love you from afar
your friendship means more to me
than anything this world provides
but like an angel you touched my heart
in a way that I've never felt before
cause I've never known what love is until this day
I know that we are only friends
but my heart wishes it to be more
so I will still hope and dream
that one day I can feel your lips pressed to mine
to hold you in my arms and say, "I love you"
@mihai80 (865)
• Romania
29 Nov 06
Yes. Poetry (from the Greek p???s??, poiesis, "making" or "creating") is a form of art in which language is used for its aesthetic qualities in addition to, or in lieu of, its of resonance may exist, between individual verses, in their patterns of rhyme or rhythm.
@Crystalwatson345 (441)
• United States
6 Dec 06
Believing in yourself you'll have know doubt
believing in love is your biggest fear.
not having faith is your biggest mistake
Not having trust, your just wasting blood.
Very true but your not believing or have 100% in yourself
Let the people make their mistake worry about yours.
If you do have a true friend why would you worry if anyone would care. When a true friend will always be there.
For better for the worse,For good and the bads
Just think positive and know someone will always have your back.
@september_1st (3209)
• Romania
30 Nov 06
- Let the angels for you pray -
Scattered glass thru my existence
Stepping right in front of me,
Guidance to my life ambitions
When there was no one to see;
You gave life from your own beeing,
And you walked along the way;
Mother, sister, child... oh, woman,
Let the angels for you pray!
I wrote this poem some time ago, let me know what you think of it.
@Crystalwatson345 (441)
• United States
6 Dec 06
yes I like poems
Believing in yourself you'll have know doubt
believing in love is your biggest fear.
not having faith is your biggest mistake
Not having trust, your just wasting blood.
Very true but your not believing or have 100% in yourself
Let the people make their mistake worry about yours.
If you do have a true friend why would you worry if anyone would care. When a true friend will always be there.
For better for the worse,For good and the bads
Just think positive and know someone will always have your back.
@Crystalwatson345 (441)
• United States
6 Dec 06
i like poems
Believing in yourself you'll have know doubt
believing in love is your biggest fear.
not having faith is your biggest mistake
Not having trust, your just wasting blood.
Very true but your not believing or have 100% in yourself
Let the people make their mistake worry about yours.
If you do have a true friend why would you worry if anyone would care. When a true friend will always be there.
For better for the worse,For good and the bads
Just think positive and know someone will always have your back.
@Crystalwatson345 (441)
• United States
6 Dec 06
Breathing
From that very first breath
in the middle of May
I've been searching for something,
but I get in my way.
From grade school to college,
sports, hobbies and work,
friendships and lovers,
yet always a jerk.
False expectations
and a mind gone amuck,
heart beating wildly
yet so often stuck.
"Take a deep breath"
my dad always said,
"This too shall pass, Son"
yet still in my head...
Was a feeling that someone
something, somehow,
was what I was needing,
but I know better now.
For what I've been searching
while creating such hell
is right here inside me
I just couldn't tell
Accepting my own self
through looking within
provides such serenity
I don't care if I win.
@Crystalwatson345 (441)
• United States
6 Dec 06
Breathing
From that very first breath
in the middle of May
I've been searching for something,
but I get in my way.
From grade school to college,
sports, hobbies and work,
friendships and lovers,
yet always a jerk.
False expectations
and a mind gone amuck,
heart beating wildly
yet so often stuck.
"Take a deep breath"
my dad always said,
"This too shall pass, Son"
yet still in my head...
Was a feeling that someone
something, somehow,
was what I was needing,
but I know better now.
For what I've been searching
while creating such hell
is right here inside me
I just couldn't tell
Accepting my own self
through looking within
provides such serenity
I don't care if I win.