Bury love
By Shizuka
@choijungeun (2629)
Hangzhou, China
May 11, 2018 7:39am CST
it's still hurting me
to miss you all the time.
The rainy day is too tender.
The red flowers and fallen leaves
are sleeping in the dust.
We're waiting for the solace
like waiting the rainbow after sleet.
Bury love,i wipe the tears.
Smiling to face
your perfect pulchritude.
Bury love,i sprinkle the sadness.
A kind of lovesickness,
To you,I don't explain.
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2 responses
@thesupersingh (42067)
• India
11 May 18
Wow, that was so good, my friend, Why don't you help me learn it
@choijungeun (2629)
• Hangzhou, China
12 May 18
it's very complicated,and my computer is too hot to keep working for a long time.and then,i'm good at writing the chinese loving poems.but i really don't know how to write the English loving poems.
What i can say is if i have spare time,i will share the method to write poems.and now,it's too hot,even in the midnight,i still sweated and can't sleep.maybe tomorrow,i'll answer you,It really needs to take some time.I'm sorry.
@choijungeun (2629)
• Hangzhou, China
13 May 18
i had written the methods to write the poems,but i am not professional,so it maybe has some mistakes.it's just some thoughts and experience of writing poems.most of them is from the Internet,and i generalized it.
@choijungeun (2629)
• Hangzhou, China
16 May 18
@mythociate thanks for your introduction,i had read a few poems of Shakespeare.but it's too hard for me.i learn the English poems is from the lyrics of popular song.surely,it's not the right way to learn the pure English poems.
so i wanna read the easy English poems,like Tagore,Keats and Whitman etc.their poems are very easy to understand.then i also want to learn the poems from Shakespeare or Shelly.
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@mythociate (21432)
• Oklahoma City, Oklahoma
16 May 18
If you added the keyword "Poetry," maybe the right-margin of this page would list some links to other poem-discussions.
What type of poem is this?
