The love song of summer
By Shizuka
@choijungeun (2629)
Hangzhou, China
August 9, 2018 6:39pm CST
The tears fell gently,
the summer wind slept quietly.
It feels so good that
you console my loneliness.
The dream in my heart,
you're my everything.
The yearning is like bubble
what was broken in the silence.
Sorry that i let you go,
let you join him for love.
The heartbroken love song,
you're still singing.
The magical youth,
who was moved by whom?
I cut off every pain with a knife,
like the rosemary always die early.
Love or hatred,it's all just story,
i waved my hands to write this despair.
But you're seduced me with the red lips,
and i fell into a black hole of love.
Is your naivety,or my persistence
let the sky fall and become the flowers?
The love sea is boundless,
the passion is endless.
I had already known that love is a void,
but i'm still loving your smile
like i really had your sweet dream.
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1 response
@choijungeun (2629)
• Hangzhou, China
10 Aug 18
To be honest,i don't what"Smooth port style" means,but i'm pleasure you like it.
this poem is very short,but my translation is not good,like a "i cut off every pain with a knife.",it's not touching.
in Chinese,it should be"i ended the pain with a knife,like pretty face always has poor fate."
Some English slang i don't know,so i just translate directly,so it reads very rough and crude.i'm sorry for this.
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@Santosvb (346)
• Guyana
10 Aug 18
@choijungeun oh oh, that was a typo error, it was supposed to say 'smooth poet style', i love the flow of it, and i understood it well, the language is fine
