Untitled Old Poem
@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
January 25, 2019 7:33am CST
He swims at the foggy white river
His owned deep canal
Salty water overflowed
From his two oblong shape elfin stars
Mostly, a not so interesting water place
But he decided to be more creative
Like how the word pain
Become more artistic to him
He wanted this stream
To resembles the plain sky
An ocean alike
But he just hated the cerulean color
He loves the literal meaning of the curvy rainbow
That'll be definitely an attractive design
But knowing blue still part of it
He has dumped the colorful scheme
Like how reality murdered his
Every majestic dream
Success is not all about hard work
Hardwork is an overrated word for success
The storm smashes what he has sowed
The sun burned his ice of effort
Luck, also thinner than needles
And he is not the chosen one
Love is just a word for the few
And every of it added to his
Melancholic river
Now, he thinks of the right
Amazing color that surely will fit
That's when a scarlet embers entered
To his imaginative thoughts
The tempting apple of Eve will surely
Fly him to other dimensions
Where he won't care anymore
For the cycle of pain
Just one last sting
Yes, a reddish river seems
An amazing art
So he is ready now
To shed liquefied rubies from his skin
But something stops
His ambitious attempt
Abruptly, he thinks of vermilion
As the color of beautiful flowers
Red as roses
Red as heart
Then, a sudden very long sighed
By then, he ascended from his canal
To give life
Another chance...
12/13/2016
Mysterious Aries
Note: Mysterious Aries is Simplfred here in Mylot or Frederick Espiritu... It's me...
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4 responses
@Nickzter1331 (4229)
• Philippines
26 Jan 19
@simplfred no problem.. hoping to read more poems you made..
@starflye78 (260)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
25 Jan 19
That is wonderfully written, I'm curious how you were able to make the line spacings stick true, I seem to be having issues with that in some of my posts and a few users have complained about things being difficult to read.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
25 Jan 19
Thank you, my friend. I just copied this from my work and it was posted like that. I'm sorry I can't help you with your query.
@ilocosboy (45156)
• Philippines
26 Jan 19
This is good poem.
But as I read the your poem you can also be write poem for children.
@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
25 Jan 19
Thank you so much for the positive feedback.
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