Changed Me

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
January 30, 2019 7:25am CST
Time, transform me Heal every touched of rage All failures that rubs me The wound of my past Teacher, modify me Teach me the right path The lane for a healthier tomorrow For me to define this life with a better meaning My friend change me Picked up my wobbly hand Give mind advice to cure its unrest I want to feel your positive outlook My dearest refine me Let me feel that genuine affection Not the phony hugs and kisses For my body and lips to attains true love Lord, enlighten me I was lost in intersecting road Please display the right ladder To the place where you are... From my tagalog poem: Baguhin Mo Ako Translated: 1-18-2016 Mysterious Aries / Simplfred
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@Sheali (7461)
• India
30 Jan 19
You portrayed your change so beautifully..
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
30 Jan 19
Thank you. This are my hopes and prayers.
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30 Jan 19
So good! Beautiful poem.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
30 Jan 19
Thanks for the reads. I'm glad that you've enjoyed it.
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31 Jan 19
@simplfred yes I did. I really want to make one too but no stanza made.
@ilocosboy (45156)
• Philippines
30 Jan 19
Nice poem Frederick
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
30 Jan 19
Thank you, my friend.
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