Hang up my thoughts, Poetry or not who knows just some words
By STPatrick
@Irishlasskicker (871)
Canada
February 6, 2019 6:15pm CST
When will the story end
Do I ever get to hang up my thoughts ?
You know the ones that bring me back to a place where I was free
Free like the raindrops falling from the sky at any moment they are there
Free falling just like my thoughts of a different time
Do I ever get to hang up my thoughts?
When will the story end
On a long winding rd I traveld
Climbed moutains
Danced on the floors of rooms with great history
I did that with my thoughts in tact
I traveled the distance and some how I never came back
When do I ever get to hang up my thoughts
Some love their memories
Some want them gone
I just wish I could hang up my thoughts and let them be gone
Say the end to the story
Say it out loud
and be done
I guess somethings like the earth , they will keep moving
and like the beats of my heart they shall go on
So no luck to day
As I carry on
My thoughts you have
do me a favour at least go to sleep :)
Irishlasskicker
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4 responses
@MistyckMoon (935)
• United States
7 Feb 19
Great poetry! I can relate so well to this. I am often haunted by thoughts and memories that refuse to let me rest as much as I try to ignore them. Great job!
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@Irishlasskicker (871)
• Canada
11 Feb 19
Thank you so much for your nice comment!! Thoughts can be annoying that is for sure
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@xander6464 (44421)
• Wapello, Iowa
7 Feb 19
If you can't hang up on them, try changing the subject. If you want to put them to sleep, I recommend baseball.
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@Irishlasskicker (871)
• Canada
11 Feb 19
Oh yes baseball can't wait for that , almost spring training :) man I miss when Jeter still played
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@xander6464 (44421)
• Wapello, Iowa
12 Feb 19
@Irishlasskicker I miss Jeter, too. And I'm tired of having to go to Arizona or Florida every time I want to see a game. I want Opening Day NOW!
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@Irishlasskicker (871)
• Canada
12 Feb 19
@xander6464 i know right it should be tomorrow for us to go in your private jet
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@janethwayne (5191)
• Philippines
22 Mar 19
Lovely poetry.I also like to write poems that comes from my heart.
@Irishlasskicker (871)
• Canada
22 Feb 19
Thanks so much :) I wish I was able to write more but not so good at it these days
@shebullet (287)
• Philippines
22 Feb 19
@Irishlasskicker I also tried writing my own poetry and i can write when i am on the mood. Try putting space so it is readable to all readers of mylot some uses glasses and i been told to put spacing too. Goodluck writing here.
