i made a verse just now!

@wanghui (894)
China
February 22, 2019 7:21am CST
i made a verse just now,do you like it ? it is: younger just care the scenery and the light of moon. joke said:if we have a baby,whose eyebrow she would resemble,mother or father? today ,she have already smiled to me. chortle,chortle.and playing the little silver bell. how time flies~~
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****DANIELLE****
@VivaLaDani13 (60803)
• Perth, Australia
3 Mar 19
@wanghui I am so sorry that I don't really understand what it means. I read it a few times and feel like I almost get it. I would love to know more about it. Would it be ok to please explain it to me a bit more? I love your handwriting too! Very neat!
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wanghui
@wanghui (894)
• China
4 Mar 19
i am so glat to explain it ~~ maybe you are a little younger compare a mother,so you couldn't real understand the emotion when i do it,i mean how time flies,and how love when i stare at my daughter. when i teenage,i seems like you,happy,thinkful,sing and dancing.just a few time to wonder what is look like if i have i baby?and i haven't her that day. now,she have been born, appear upon my vision,how cute she is and how the time fast~~
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****DANIELLE****
@VivaLaDani13 (60803)
• Perth, Australia
5 Mar 19
@wanghui That's really beautiful! Thank you so much for explaining it to me.
wanghui
@wanghui (894)
• China
5 Mar 19
@VivaLaDani13 you are welcome,thank you too~~
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Nevena Zivkovic
@Nevena83 (65277)
• Serbia
22 Feb 19
I like it.
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wanghui
@wanghui (894)
• China
22 Feb 19
thank you ~~
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DianneN
@DianneN (247184)
• United States
22 Feb 19
Poetry is very personal. I can't understand it, even though I taught poetry and how to interpret it. It may need some tweaking.
wanghui
@wanghui (894)
• China
23 Feb 19
haha,really,?it is so exciting knew you taught poetry, poetor wouldn't be alone~~it is a joke~~ i will adjust it again. i mean how time is flies,when we younger,we weren't think what is life,only love the light of moon, sometimes we chated that if i would have a baby ,we wonder whose face feature her will more heredity,mother or father? today,ten years have flies,she have grown up ,i describe when i was youth and now what she is playing,with a mom's emotion. it is so valuable some opinions from you ~~
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wanghui
@wanghui (894)
• China
24 Feb 19
@DianneN thank you ,it is a little chinese poetor style,maybe,one day,i could try an American poetor writting style,maybe i would consult you for it.~~haha
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DianneN
@DianneN (247184)
• United States
23 Feb 19
@wanghui That is much better and now I understand its meaning. Lots of emotion going on.
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