The Fear
@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
February 27, 2019 10:39pm CST
Can you blame me for viewing life gloomily sometimes...
As dim as night or even darker...
Whenever I go beyond unreached, I saw strangers within me...
They know a lot well... They often brought me to the farthest end...
Religion gives us hope... But for them, there is no hope at all...
For them, we are only God's toys...
They know every fate of human... Death...
That the blade of the father of time was always in our neck...
That every day we became closer to our unhappy ending...
They were so strong...
They began as my sidekick...
When I started counting 1 2 3... Learning ABC's...
I even taught they were a gift... My guardians...
But as time goes by... Their motive was unleashed...
To ruin a life... To ate and destroyed mind...
There was a time that I never know me anymore...
They possessed me so much that I can't even control myself...
It's like a beast was unraveled within me...
Their passion was to get into once head...
To play mind games with it... To turn white to gray...
Beautiful days into rainy... Love to hatred...
My body fell numb suddenly... Here they come...
They really did exist... My head will be at war yet again...
On what I've feared most... My sudden METAMORPHOSIS...
Note: This is a very old piece of mine.
I don't know how to explain this piece. It is what it is...
Picture: Pixabay
Mysterious Aries / Simplyfred
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
28 Feb 19
I don't know when anymore. Most of my work I've noted the date when I've written the piece. Sadly, I've forgotten to note the date of this stuff but surely it was way back then. More than a decade ago...
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@Sheali (7461)
• India
28 Feb 19
@simplfred Ok.. I was just wondering, what were you going through in your life that time
@yoalldudes (35037)
• Philippines
28 Feb 19
Do you practice transcendental meditation? This seems to be about existentialism.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
28 Feb 19
@yoalldudes Sometimes reader forgets to understand that poetry can be a story too or just a great portrayal because of the emotion being attached within one piece...
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
28 Feb 19
My first time to hear that. Is that a good thing or a bad thing? Ha ha...
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@yoalldudes (35037)
• Philippines
28 Feb 19
@simplfred Oh haha! I'm bad at interpreting poems. Maybe it really is something based on the perspective of the one reading.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
28 Feb 19
Yeah, I think I've bumped to you too sometimes. So you have the same name in FC... Self integration, that sound interesting.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
28 Feb 19
@sofssu I usually used the Simplyfred name also. I just mistakenly wrong spelled it here...
@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
1 Mar 19
Yeah, those monster haven't visited me for a long while. Thanks.
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@db20747 (43440)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
28 Feb 19
It's not paranoia!! There really are bad spirits in people we cant see at first that are out to turn your blue skies grey!! And You cannot see them but you feel them and cant quite figure out where it's coming from!! But look around closely and you will see where it is coming from when you feel this way when they are around you!!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
1 Mar 19
That could be possible but I admit of most of my piece this one is not just fiction to me. I just don't know how to properly elaborate the feeling of mine when I've written it then...
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@RasmaSandra (80906)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
28 Feb 19
Very creative and interesting. I love that line the beast unraveled within me. Fascinating.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
28 Feb 19
I'm glad you have a favorite line within this piece. Thank you for having an interest and seeing how it was creatively done.
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