My Friend Ben (Lyrical)

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
March 4, 2019 6:12am CST
I will tell you a story about my friend Ben Always rating my poetry with a perfect ten One macho guy in our simple town Last year, he takes home the Mr. Admirable crown There's really something about my friend Ben He really likes the journey of my talkative pen He said its prettiness afar from the rose Dancing gracefully while in paper leaving its ghost Indeed I have a story about my friend Ben Who reads my drafts again and again Little I've realized that it's more than it seems to be Until I've heard him saying "he loves me as me" I've felt sorry then, for my longtime friend Ben The only poem I could dedicate to him Was a poem for a friend I will tell you a story about my friend Ben He changed his name now She called herself Jen... March 8, 2017 Mysterious Aries / Simplyfred Image: Pixabay
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@Hannihar (130218)
• Israel
23 May 19
@simplfred Thank you for that. It was really lovely what you said about your friend Ben.
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@Hannihar (130218)
• Israel
23 May 19
@simplfred You are welcome and I get to see a lot of discussions from way back.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
23 May 19
Thank you, my friend. I'm glad you still found this discussion.
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@Nevena83 (65277)
• Serbia
4 Mar 19
I like to read your poems.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
4 Mar 19
I'm glad to hear that, my friend... Thank you.
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@sofssu (23662)
4 Mar 19
I love the lyrical quality of this poem, Hmm and the abrupt turn of events in the last two lines.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
4 Mar 19
Haha... This is quite a song that played in my mind...
@db20747 (43440)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
4 Mar 19
Shocking ending!! This Builds the curiosity!! What about ben! He's now Jen!!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
4 Mar 19
Jen and beautiful now. Haha.
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• Asaba, Nigeria
4 Mar 19
Lovely poem. I love the rhymes. Keep it up Frederick.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
4 Mar 19
It is more than a song than a poem... It has a tune, sadly my voice is not good now to record it. Thank you...