The Needs

@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
April 10, 2019 3:58pm CST
It needs the voice of an elephant Those ears that's often asleep Sweet lullaby doesn't creep For those darkness faiths adamant It needs the fullest of affection Those hearts that feels nil That traversed depression hill To alter the gray thoughts complexion It needs the fragrance of Eden Those noses that only smell That death stinky farting spell To make the aroma even It needs the tree of Moses Those eyes that can't see That the air we exhale is free To rip the vision of black roses It needs the flavor of the rainbow Those tongues fed up with salts That wanted to taste the last spicy halt To revive the savor of hope that died long ago... October 24, 2017 Image: Pixabay Mysterious Aries / Simplyfred
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@DianneN (247186)
• United States
10 Apr 19
That certainly is a wonderful poem! Very touching.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Apr 19
I'm glad to hear that. Thank you...
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@DianneN (247186)
• United States
13 Apr 19
@LeaPea2417 (37336)
• Toccoa, Georgia
11 Apr 19
That is nicely written.
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@LeaPea2417 (37336)
• Toccoa, Georgia
11 Apr 19
@simplfred your welcome.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Apr 19
Thank you for the compliment.
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@GardenGerty (160242)
• United States
11 Apr 19
It stirs our senses to read this.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Apr 19
I'm glad to know that it has that kind of effect. Thank you...
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@LadyDuck (469488)
• Switzerland
11 Apr 19
This is a wonderful and touching poem.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Apr 19
Thank you so much...
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@jaboUK (64354)
• United Kingdom
11 Apr 19
Lovely poem showing a great depth of emotion. Well done.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Apr 19
Thank you so much for the appreciation...
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@kobesbuddy (78885)
• East Tawas, Michigan
10 Apr 19
Very expressive poem, that you've written! Good rhyme:)
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Apr 19
Thank you so much...
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@inertia4 (27960)
• United States
15 May 19
Another wonderful poem I must say.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
16 May 19
Thank you so much for the appreciation.
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@inertia4 (27960)
• United States
16 May 19
@simplfred You're very welcome my friend.
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@cacay1 (83319)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
13 Apr 19
Very nice poem full of deep thoughts, congrats.
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@cacay1 (83319)
• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines
13 Apr 19
@simplfred ,you are very much welcome my friend.
@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
13 Apr 19
Thank you, Kabayan!
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@db20747 (43440)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
12 Apr 19
The eyes that can't see brightness, and all the negatives need bright things like the rainbow and Eden sweet scents to make them bright again!! I know a few like this!! Very soulful!!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
12 Apr 19
Yes, my friend. I was inspired with the situation of my uncle then who seems to lost hope. Right now, he is doing well I think...
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11 Apr 19
Awesome I love it
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
11 Apr 19
I'm glad you like the piece. Thank you...
@emelas (120)
• Maputo, Mozambique
16 Apr 19
fine
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@Strenj (119)
• Baguio, Philippines
10 Apr 19
What a great poem, Frederick! Keep posting more poems and we'll see if we get there. Poem is life too. It gives blood to readers' emotions and breathe to rhythms and verses!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
10 Apr 19
I agree with you kabayan. Thanks and welcome here in Mylot!
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