SHADOWS CRY (Lyrical)

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@simplfred (20641)
Philippines
June 21, 2019 6:43am CST
Don't ask me, how's my life? I will just say I'm okay You won't see the cuts of knife Or notice that I'd gone astray Heaven, I'm here again Doing my thing Mixing words and champagne And I began to swing A slow mysterious dance With teardrops kisses in my skin Need not to glance To know how life has been Just feel me You'll see my shadow is crying Salt taste sea The special fish is dying So, don't ask me, how's my life? I will just say I'm okay You won't see the cuts of knife Or notice that I'd gone astray Smiling while the shadow is crying Smiling while the shadow is crying Need not to glance To know how life has been... July 17, 2017 Mysterious Aries
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@Hannihar (130213)
• Israel
21 Jun 19
@simplfred Thank you for sharing.
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@Hannihar (130213)
• Israel
21 Jun 19
@simplfred You are very welcome.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Thank you for reading, my friend...
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@LowRiderX (22903)
• Serbia
21 Jun 19
Great, some parts are so inspiring that they seem like inspirational quote
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Thank you, my friend... I'm glad you've seen some inspirational quote with my quite dark lyrics of mine...
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@LowRiderX (22903)
• Serbia
22 Jun 19
@simplfred You are welcome. I hope everything is Ok. Did you find some alternative job in the meantime?
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
24 Jun 19
@LowRiderX I have a few but I'm not really earning well now online...
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@Sreekala (34312)
• India
21 Jun 19
Good but wonder how can our shadow able to do different things.
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@Sreekala (34312)
• India
21 Jun 19
@simplfred just kidded dear. Good and keep it up.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
@Sreekala Thank you always, my friend...
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Ha ha... I just don't know. I have to observe my shadow... Ha ha... Metaphor thing for a poet...
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@Bhadine (594)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Did you compose this yourself? To be honest, I can totally relate to your poem. I enjoyed reading.
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@Bhadine (594)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
@simplfred Oh, do you sing?
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Yes, I did... It is quite a lyrics than a poem, it used to have a tune but I can't remember the tune anymore... I'm glad that you relate by...
@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
22 Jun 19
@Bhadine Just for my self, my friend... Usually in the bathroom... Ha ha...
@amadeo (111938)
• United States
21 Jun 19
Good morning or afternoon there. That was very nice there.Good job
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@amadeo (111938)
• United States
22 Jun 19
@simplfred See you tomorrow
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Likewise, my friend. Good day, and thank you...
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@Aansh13 (11397)
• New Delhi, India
21 Jun 19
Beautiful I read it twice ... I liked it so much ..
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Thank you so much, my friend. It used to have a tune, sadly, I can't remember its tune anymore...
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@anil02 (24688)
• India
21 Jun 19
It is beauty full one.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Thank you some much, my friend...
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@anil02 (24688)
• India
23 Jun 19
@simplfred welcome
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• Preston, England
24 Jun 19
powerful poem, many of our scars are on the inside
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
24 Jun 19
Very true, Sir.
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@db20747 (43440)
• Washington, District Of Columbia
23 Jun 19
Quite often people look one way on the outside but feel another on the inside!!
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
24 Jun 19
I agree, my friend.
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@dya80dya (36774)
24 Jun 19
I like your poem.
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
24 Jun 19
Thank you, my friend...
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Nice..
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@simplfred (20641)
• Philippines
21 Jun 19
Thank you, Kabayan!
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