Three line poem
@supasupa (136)
5 responses
@amitkokiladitya (171927)
• Agra, India
8 Jun 20
@supasupa that is good. Self introspection always helps us a lot.
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@m_audrey6788 (58472)
• Germany
8 Jun 20
Sorry can`t help you. I just can`t see what you really want to point out there in your poem 
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@innertalks (21916)
• Australia
9 Jun 20
Your rejection made me reflect on this question.
Why do we sometimes need to suffer a rejection in our lives, or do we?
Rejection comes from the idea of them rejecting something, because the capturing of what they want, is not captured in what you give them, according to them.
The truth is, though, that to pass somebody else's standards is never a rejection, but more really just about you not knowing/understanding their rules, or what they want.
In any other context, your poem is very good, as others have said here too.
@innertalks (21916)
• Australia
9 Jun 20
@supasupa Keep writing poetry. I hope l have encouraged you a bit too.
Rejection links into disappointment, sometimes too.
Disappointment leads to not wanting to try again.
It is about us trying our best.
Not about other's criteria of what they think is the best, or our best.
And yet, we can learn from others, and from rejection too.
Our best can always become a better best!
@supasupa (136)
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10 Jun 20
@innertalks very true.u'v encouraged me alot.thank you
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