His Enemy That Hated Him.....
By Sue21
@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
Pamplona, Spain
September 8, 2020 3:40am CST
He turned back when he heard the terrible cry
He felt the raging pain in that voice
Shining a torchlight
Lying there was his own worst enemy
Trapped in a wild animals snare
He freed him swiftly and gently
Although with a gaping wound
The other one cried out again
Why have you set me free
When all I have ever done is to hate you
To hate you and snare and trap you
Why have you done this to me
He held his enemies hand and pulled him up
He took him on his back
Without ever looking back.
Nuff, said all my own words its based on a true story like I said nuff said.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
8 Sep 20
Took me a while to put all of what I was feeling into so few words could have been shorter but then I would have taken the real meaning of it out.
Thank you again.
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@amitkokiladitya (171927)
• Agra, India
8 Sep 20
@lovinangelsinstead21 that is fine. I always prefer playing around with words.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
8 Sep 20
@amitkokiladitya
Its not so easy is it as sometimes the words and the feelings all wanto to come out at the same time.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Sep 20
Deeply is how I felt it while I was writing it then I forget about it just how it works with me.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
10 Sep 20
@DianneN
Thank you very much have a great day ahead.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
8 Sep 20
Its a great story and I wish every News Reader would tell us ones like that could it be every day?
Maybe not but every once in a while oh yes.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
9 Sep 20
@simone10
I wonder if we can drop the Newsreaders a hint or two?
Better still the Television channel itself after all they are the ones that put all the sad stories on.
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@simone10 (54187)
• Louisville, Kentucky
9 Sep 20
@lovinangelsinstead21 I totally agree with you!
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@DaddyEvil (137261)
• United States
14 Sep 20
Very interesting. You have conjured a picture of hate turning into compassion. 
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
14 Sep 20
So glad you get the entire picture.
Its really a thing you could feel for a lot of situations as well.
Its something I usually do mix other stuff in with it.
Have to say I don´t hate anyone myself.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
15 Sep 20
@DaddyEvil
Boy do I know that feeling most said to me after going through a tough situation that they would hate the said people for the rest of their lives me but not me.
However I am no saint either and it took me quite a while to work my way past even bothering to dislike them for it.
@DaddyEvil (137261)
• United States
14 Sep 20
@lovinangelsinstead21 I understand...
I dislike a few people but I don't hate anyone. Hate takes too much time and energy I'd rather use for good things. Hate can drag a person down until life isn't worth living.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
14 Sep 20
Thank you very much and I really liked doing this post.
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@Hannihar (130218)
• Israel
14 Sep 20
@lovinangelsinstead21
That was a nice thing the person did for the enemy.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
14 Sep 20
It was a very nice thing he did for him yes.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
15 Sep 20
@Hannihar
Thanks and have a great day ahead.
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@cherriefic (10399)
• Philippines
8 Sep 20
Wow that’s a good way to write a story.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
8 Sep 20
I was mulling over about how to write it for a few days now and gave up and then came back and just wrote it like it is that is how I do that.
If I think it out it does not work.
@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
12 Sep 20
I would hope that they are not enemies either don´t think they would be after such a happening.
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@Letranknight2015 (51971)
• Philippines
15 Sep 20
I doubt I can write this good.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
15 Sep 20
Of course you can write that good it took me ages to start doing this all over again though.
All I do is to write short stories that´s all with a bit of poetic thing in.
You are smart enough to do the same.
@crazyhorseladycx (39509)
• United States
10 Sep 20
this shows what'cha hope fer'n humanity - compassion, e'en with'n enemy.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
12 Sep 20
You got it exactly that is what I am really putting across here.
Thank you very much stay safe and well.
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@crazyhorseladycx (39509)
• United States
13 Sep 20
@lovinangelsinstead21 yer welcome 'n ditto :)
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@everwonderwhy (7361)
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11 Sep 20
Such no greater love done by this man who rescued and saved the man who hated him.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
12 Sep 20
Its how he is Iguess and this kind of thing can happen on any other level also.
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
8 Sep 20
Thanks very much.
Have a great day ahead.
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@Butterfingers (66583)
• India
8 Sep 20
You're very good at playing with words dear
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@lovinangelsinstead21 (36850)
• Pamplona, Spain
8 Sep 20
When something like that story hits so close to the heart its not too difficult to write about it a bit hard to make it short in words though with a meaning to it all.
Nuff said.
Thank you as well.
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