an evening of reminiscing someone from my memories
@chamae (69)
October 15, 2020 10:11am CST
wrote this poem(by thinking of someone)
Missing you by this hour
Just reminscing some of our memories
while we talk we got no worries
as we fully understood one another
as if we are together
In a place like u can call Home
together with my kids
and your pet
but i know
like u said gurtie stay outside
just u saw her nearby not inside your house
But it is fine bubba is there
and i know you'll definitely give care
Like u did to me and my kids
And wishing all goes back to normal
and youll be here
to stay by you near.
JUST TO LET YOU KNOW THIS TIME IS OURS
coz i always think and missing you by this hour.
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@Nakitakona (56481)
• Philippines
18 Oct 20
Good poem but in writing it's improper to use text words like u instead of you. It will defeat the essence of the thought of the poem. Hope you understand what I mean. No personal insult I made.
@chamae (69)
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18 Oct 20
yeah i understand what you mean
but its understood by the someone i am referring into my poem but thank you and i know its improper to use text "u" instead of you...
I don't feel insulted in any ways coz it's ok to be corrected..it only shows my imperfection..isn't it
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@Nakitakona (56481)
• Philippines
18 Oct 20
@chamae I know it's addressed to the person whom you endear so much but you have posted it publicly for us to interact. If it's kept privately you can write anything you want.
