Sometimes what I write haunts me

@cperry2 (5608)
Newport, Oregon
January 5, 2021 1:41pm CST
This morning, after reading the news, digesting all the stuff that is happening at this moment, I sat and wrote. I claim no talent in poetry, or prosetry and generally I choose not share this kind of stuff, but this one begs for me to do just that. So here it is: My eyes are open, but I do not see I am a sheep. I follow blindly, Clinging to baseless hope Truth sheared by tricksters Still, I pledge my loyalty. The power hungry, push for more Seeds of doubt, already sown, Take root, grow, flower. Their swelling fruit is darkness. But my eyes are open, and I do not see. Distant drums of discord Echo across the land. My betters lead me to war My life to better theirs My eyes are closed, I cannot see.
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@Hytton03 (5451)
• Philippines
5 Jan 21
Oh like it
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@cperry2 (5608)
• Newport, Oregon
5 Jan 21
Thank you
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@Hytton03 (5451)
• Philippines
5 Jan 21
@cperry2 welcome
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@sallypup (61627)
• Centralia, Washington
5 Jan 21
Deep pain well said.
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@cperry2 (5608)
• Newport, Oregon
5 Jan 21
Thank you, Sometimes things like this just hit me up side the head and I have to write them out.
@RebeccasFarm (90474)
• Arvada, Colorado
6 Jan 21
Best line is my life to better theirs..thats right that is what they do in a nutshell
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• Arvada, Colorado
6 Jan 21
@cperry2 Welcome Clint
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@cperry2 (5608)
• Newport, Oregon
6 Jan 21
Those in power, or who hope to gain power use the rest of us as pawns. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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@LadyDuck (472074)
• Switzerland
6 Jan 21
Very good poem, it describes so well an unpleasant situation.
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@LadyDuck (472074)
• Switzerland
6 Jan 21
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@cperry2 (5608)
• Newport, Oregon
6 Jan 21
Thank you Anna. I appreciate the words of confidence.
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@Fleura (30541)
• United Kingdom
5 Jan 21
I like that, it is really meaningful.
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@cperry2 (5608)
• Newport, Oregon
5 Jan 21
Thank you for the correction. I fixed this.
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@Fleura (30541)
• United Kingdom
5 Jan 21
@cperry2 Do you write a lot of poetry? You obviously have a talent for it.
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@cperry2 (5608)
• Newport, Oregon
5 Jan 21
@Fleura Actually no, I am more of a fiction writer. But I have dabbled in Poetry a bit. Generally these things pop up in my head when I am trying to create a scene for my characters. This morning I believe reading all the stuff going on with Trump and his ill advised attempts to steal the 2020 election from the voters triggered this.
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@Namelesss (3365)
• United States
5 Jan 21
Nice reality check in your poem.
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@cperry2 (5608)
• Newport, Oregon
5 Jan 21
It is. Maybe that is why this one haunts me.
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@thelme55 (77165)
• Germany
5 Jan 21
That´s good. Thanks for sharing.
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@cperry2 (5608)
• Newport, Oregon
5 Jan 21
You are welcome.
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