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Poem

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@nzlz123 (6473)

Indonesia

February 17, 2021 5:32am CST

I like to write especially poems to throw what i feel. But still i'm just literally an amateur. But today i kinda feel want to share one of my poems in here. Here it is: "It's hard You can't imagine Being held with feeling Alive but death Half-open door Sunrise through the window The couples say the vow How it feels to be loved? Wondering, wandering Never has the answer Midnight calling Left with one sleeping Little did we know The water doesn't flow Little did we know The heart still broke" Feel free for the critic and advice

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@aureategloom (11150)

• Bosnia And Herzegovina

18 Feb 21

i'm not a fan of poems, but i'm glad you shared yours on this site. i think you should do whatever you like, no matter how it is. i'm antitalent for drawing, but i'll still try - it's my art, no matter what it looks like. i worked on that. so keep it up

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@nzlz123 (6473)

• Indonesia

19 Feb 21

Thank youu and i 'd like to look at one of your drawing tho

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@aureategloom (11150)

• Bosnia And Herzegovina

19 Feb 21

@nzlz123 maybe someday if i feel like sharing it. i like to keep a lot of things for myself only haha

@Laurakemunto (12862)

• Kenya

17 Feb 21

@nzlz123 Good poem, I can see you have employed various literary styles with practice, you can become a good and renowned poet. Keep up!

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@Laurakemunto (12862)

• Kenya

19 Feb 21

@nzlz123 welcooome

@nzlz123 (6473)

• Indonesia

19 Feb 21

Thank youu

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@sol_cee (38219)

• Philippines

19 Feb 21

Deep. And sad. I did write poems here a long time ago.

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@nzlz123 (6473)

• Indonesia

19 Feb 21

Thank you, well i'd like to see your poem too

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@Dheasy (121)

• Indonesia

17 Feb 21

I like the peom too. But i can't write the good poem. I had ever learnt but i still can't understand how to write the good. Sad

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@nzlz123 (6473)

• Indonesia

19 Feb 21

Well i think we can't really define good in poem tho. Everyone has different perspective

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@ladyhero (3846)

• Indonesia

17 Feb 21

every first step is an amateur, then improvisation to try your best, until you become a professional, passionate work, any way what is the tittle?

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@nzlz123 (6473)

• Indonesia

17 Feb 21

I didn't have a title to that tho haha. Tbh i rarely put on a title on my poems and i don't know why i'm like that.

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@Bubba90 (1755)

• Indonesia

18 Feb 21

good poem, I think have talented

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@nzlz123 (6473)

• Indonesia

19 Feb 21

Thank youuu

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Ma. Lourdes Macaya

@macayada (1497)

• Cavite City, Philippines

17 Feb 21

Lonesome is identified in your poem.

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@nzlz123 (6473)

• Indonesia

19 Feb 21

Yup i agree

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Ma. Lourdes Macaya

@macayada (1497)

• Cavite City, Philippines

19 Feb 21

There are those who can write song, poem, story who gets inspired or being carried away by their emotions.