The Peach-Blossom Temple

Hangzhou, China
May 23, 2021 12:16pm CST
Sorrow,sorrow,sorrow, i visited the Peach-Blossom Temple when i was a young girl,so many dreams to awaken. I just wished to have a romantic love,sweet and deep. arrow,arrow,arrow, This was where i encountered you,my baby. You sought for the blue butterfly,maybe i could be one of the butterflies,stop on your fingertip. Since you left me,my heart is a nomad, snowflake-form brooch,sugar puff. Every day and night,i missed you so bad. Ponytail i plaited,anemone is my favorite stuff. Losing the hope of meeting you again,how shall i coagulate my tears at the moment i dream about you? Kirschwasser,who am here drinking this loving dew? Baby,do you know i'm totally bewitched by you. First time i dabbled the dreamy love,i never thought i will be sick of yearning your smile,your sorrows. If love is doomed to be without an ending,let those blue butterflies be the loving arrows. You loitered the Peach-Blossom Temple again, sniffed the fragrance of unspoken love. How am i supposed to tell you what i am lookin'? You stared the peach blossoms,hid in rose grove. It's my ghost that getting close to you,do you hear? my dear,i whisper near your ear. Pain engrossed on the past time we'd played, water or dragonflies,they were so beautiful,so overjoyed. You grovelled before the Buddha,incense you burnt. cicadas groaned in the rainy later spring. Sorry that i can't be your girl this life,candled the evening, so light,so bright,so quiet,only our heartbreaks pant Beyond the river,peach blossoms fell on your feet. you crossed the life and death,it all means nothing. Thanks for revisiting my lily garden again,it's so sweet. If love is a tragedy,let our yearning bloom in the snow like peach blossoms.
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@just4him (317241)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
23 May 21
Very sad poem. Nice.
• Hangzhou, China
23 May 21
Thanks for your commenting,yep,it's a sad love poem.i'm glad you like it
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@just4him (317241)
• Green Bay, Wisconsin
23 May 21
@choijungeun You're welcome.
@RebeccasFarm (90474)
• Arvada, Colorado
23 May 21
This is life and the beautiful colours of love. Thank you for sharing with us, we are blessed to be able to read it. I hope you are well Shizuka.
• Arvada, Colorado
24 May 21
@choijungeun Oh so good to know this. I worry of you there where you are restricted, but you still shine like a diamond in the sky of stars.
• Hangzhou, China
23 May 21
I'm very fine,thanks for your commenting.I wish you have a nice day
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@kaylachan (71785)
• Daytona Beach, Florida
23 May 21
Nice poem.
@thelme55 (77165)
• Germany
23 May 21
Beautiful poem. I like the peach blossoms. I have seen a Chinese drama "Eternal Love" and it was awesome view of the peach blossoms.
• Hangzhou, China
23 May 21
Thanks for dropping by,yep.peach blossoms are very beautiful.In Chinese ancient culture,peach blossoms represent the young love,the pure romance,and the beautiful girl.It has the smell of the spring and the first love.
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@thelme55 (77165)
• Germany
24 May 21
@choijungeun Wow! Thank you for the heads up.
@CarolDM (203422)
• Nashville, Tennessee
22 Aug 21
You are very talented. I can relate to this poem.
• Morocco
23 May 21
@choijungeun very nice Chinese poem and a great story too ;)
• Hangzhou, China
23 May 21
Thanks for your commenting.i'm very glad to hear that.
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