I Was Wrong

@josie_ (10034)

Philippines

September 16, 2022 9:17pm CST

I was wrong Why did I believe your promises when your love is a deception Lies that my heart continue to cling to the homeless seeking a place to rest among the thorns of a rose that is you Daggers with the sweet scent of pain pierce through my false impression as you whisper softly how sorry you were for my error *The muse of poetry dropped by

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@allknowing (136540)

• India

18 Sep 22

Is there a real person there?

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@josie_ (10034)

• Philippines

18 Sep 22

Probably a very conflicted person who needs a psychoanalyst.

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@sjvg1976 (41281)

• Delhi, India

17 Sep 22

Nicely written

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@josie_ (10034)

• Philippines

17 Sep 22

Glad you like it. Thank you.

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@mayka123 (16605)

• India

7 Oct 22

Nice play with words.

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@josie_ (10034)

• Philippines

8 Oct 22

Occasionally I get inspired.

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@jstory07 (139742)

• Roseburg, Oregon

18 Sep 22

Deception in love is not good. Love is good with the right person.

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@josie_ (10034)

• Philippines

18 Sep 22

A play of words when doing poetry. But often we deceive ourselves with a false image of the person we are in love with.

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@jstory07 (139742)

• Roseburg, Oregon

18 Sep 22

@josie_ You did good with your play of words.

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@sol_cee (38219)

• Philippines

17 Sep 22

Ouch sounds like a Moira song

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@josie_ (10034)

• Philippines

17 Sep 22

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@sol_cee (38219)

• Philippines

17 Sep 22

@josie_ Is that you?

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@josie_ (10034)

• Philippines

17 Sep 22

@sol_cee I wish. the singer. But I'm way past the emotions. They belong to the foolish, wide-eyed younger generation.

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@Nakitakona (56486)

• Philippines

5 Oct 22

What a poem of remorseful.

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@josie_ (10034)

• Philippines

5 Oct 22

No remorse. "Love means never saying you're sorry."~Love story the movie

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@Nakitakona (56486)

• Philippines

9 Oct 22

@josie_ I have heard it but never watched the movie.

@cacay1 (83505)

• Cagayan De Oro, Philippines

5 Oct 22

Wow nice one.

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@josie_ (10034)

• Philippines

6 Oct 22

Thank you.