The men in white coats are coming to get me.

@xFiacre (13023)
Ireland
November 18, 2024 5:35pm CST
It’s the end of October The summer is over The streets are much colder The cafés are warmer Rome is just rising Young David’s surmising That ladies past midnight Are too enterprising So jealousy burns In the heart of the boy When his brother sins With a devilish ploy So he gathers the ladies As midnight approaches To love them and paint them And feed them cockroaches His cousin Bamboo Leads the way To the loo And abandons him there At the top of the stair And The people all stare When he pulls on the chain And no rainbow appears For the water’s not rain And the daylight abandons the graveyard.
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@AmbiePam (92781)
• United States
18 Nov
Yep, they are coming to get you.
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@xFiacre (13023)
• Ireland
18 Nov
@ambiepam Don’t let them take me away please. I promise I’ll be good.
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@AmbiePam (92781)
• United States
18 Nov
@xFiacre That’s what they all say…although you could probably convince them.
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@LindaOHio (178701)
• United States
19 Nov
Good poem. Run before they come. Have a good day.
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@JudyEv (340067)
• Rockingham, Australia
19 Nov
Take cover NOW!!
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• United States
19 Nov
I saw that you promised AmbiePam that you'd be good. You know that's not possible. Do you recognize my new User Name similar to the last?
@xFiacre (13023)
• Ireland
19 Nov
@Looeyville Ah, there you are - missed you. Was a bit worried. Only realised recently that LouAvul is how the name of your fair city sounds if pronounced the way locals are said to pronounce it. Good to see you back.
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