Life is what life is
By kommagao
@kommagao (68)
China
December 5, 2006 8:45am CST
Through all the ups, all the downs,
Some will be there, some can't be found.
If they won't care as they should, so be it.
This is life in the way that I wish to see it.
You can give your all, or you can try not.
When they decide to leave, what have you got?
You build it up, then it breaks away.
This is life in the way I see it today.
Days come and go, true hearts stay close.
Without happiness, love is an imitation at most.
You haven't stayed close, it's hard to love you,
This is life in a way that is sadly true.
To leave behind such a feeble mind,
forget it and pursue someone real.
This is my goal, and in time...
This will be life and the way that I feel.
2 responses
@lena2000 (2392)
• Belgium
5 Dec 06
For now Silence is surrounding us.
Words will rise at the right occasion,
leaves may fall on busy streets, who cares..
Time goes on, we go on,
we live our lives until faith decides its enough.
Memories fade..
important turns in our life are being made.
The way we eat, we sleep ,
we talk with or without eachother.
The purpose of our existence,
our true meaning
Vageness and the mystery, unresolved.
Memories keep us away from our conscioussnes,
dreams will come true when time is due.
For now A poem for your deepest thoughts will do..
@tanujarneja (2829)
• India
5 Dec 06
gOOD POETRY.............i TOO WROTE SOMETHING ON LIFE WHEN I WAS IN COLLEGE.................
THE TITLE WAS "WHATS THE MEANING OF LIFE? "