Ever wrote a poem? ( ... sure you did :P )

Romania
December 8, 2006 11:26am CST
If yes, please post it here. We would be glad to read it.
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lena2000
@lena2000 (2392)
• Belgium
8 Dec 06
Where are you tonight my love? What is it that you do? It's true my heart is torn apart When I'm not with you What enchanted thoughts swim through your head? Are any of them of me? When, my dear, you go to bed Is it my face you see? Who is honoured with your presence now? And do they even care? The thought of you not being admired Fills me with despair Do they appreciate your loveliness? Do they marvel at your splendor? Do they love to hear your velvet voice? Do they adore your smile so tender? If they do not Then they all are fools and had you been with me Every day, my love, you'd be a king because that's what you are to me I'm at your feet and I come with gifts my body, heart, and soul They're yours to do with as you please to command and to control I give myself with all my heart I'm yours for all of time Your slave, your queen, your anything only say that you are mine
roxanne4blu
@roxanne4blu (104)
• Romania
8 Dec 06
I'm speechless. One can feel that it has been written from the heart. You must have really loved that man, but I think that you shouldn't be "at his feet". Give to the person you love anything, but not your integrity. But I understand. It's a been there, done that situation for me. "Once upon a time I was falling in love/Now I'm just falling apart!" - you may not know the song, but the lyrics are nice. I loved once, now it's so hard to have faith again. Sometimes I still miss him, sometimes I just hate him. Othertimes I just want to love again!
yorgaki
@yorgaki (678)
• Romania
4 Jan 07
or you are afraid to believe that such woman can love him with a so profound and giving love ... I will tell you something nice tough : your love could be described as "there was one day when we were alone on this world, only the two of us, but that moment is gone now ..."
yorgaki
@yorgaki (678)
• Romania
4 Jan 07
and also : "I would love to be born on your eyes, to live next to your cheek and to die on your lips ..."
kk_84in
@kk_84in (1686)
• India
8 Dec 06
I do not write poems...but I do like to read nice poems wrote by other people.
roxanne4blu
@roxanne4blu (104)
• Romania
8 Dec 06
I like reading poems too. Sometimes I'm amazed by how nice people can write. This is one of my poems. Not one of the best ... :P My world away Day after day, This is my world away, My time out, For times I’m in doubt. My hidden place – Where I await God’s grace Where I try to escape From the whirl of thoughts That spur me into craziness, That lead me into dimness. This is my sunny corner, Where I come to seek peace, I come to find answers, I come to feel free. This is the journey of a thousand miles Inside my own heart and smiles . Goaded by faith I follow my bliss, And I try to enjoy this!