Would you be so kind as to correct the mistakes I made in my composition?

When asking about the modes of traveling different people have different opinions. Some people prefer traveling in a team while other would rather travel alone. There are advantages to both of these options as well as disadvantages. Traveling in a group may save you some money and alot of hassle with the arrangements. However when you have so many people traveling together they all want to do different things and visit different places, you may not be able to fit it all in. This is why people might prefer to travel alone. They would have every opportunity to visit the sites they wish to see. In my opinion traveling in a group is better. Since I am a student I must rely on my parents to provide me with money for such adventures. Also being a student prevents me from having the time to properly plan a trip.

I am also a foreigner in english , but i can correct you, I think this may not be a bad correctd version. Since I am a foreiger studying Enlish,I wish you can give some advice to my composition.Words fail to express my th?nkness. modes of traveling: When asking about the modes of traveling,different people offer different opinions.Some people prefer traveling in team,but others disagree,they believe in traveling individually which is the best way. Both of the two modes have advantages and disadvantages.Traveling in a team may save you some money,besides you needn't consider much.For instance,when you start a journey,then how will you find a hotel,etc.All the preparation will be done by the travelling company.However,you may not have enough time to pay a visit.That's why some people choose traveling individually.Only in this way can you enjoy your journey.But you have to spend more money and have to pay attention on the preparation. As to me,I prefer traveling in a team.Since I am a student in a university,my daily expenses are mostly depended on my parents.What's more,I don't have enough time to thing of the preparation before traveling.So I hold the opinion that traveling in a team is a proper way for me. How's my correction. I think its not bad.

There are quite a few problems here, you need to seek guidance from your University, it would take too long for me to do it. Keep trying, you're doing well, the English does need correcting but you also repeat yourself too much.

Since I am a foreiger studying Enlish,I wish you could give some advice to my composition.Words fail to express my thankness. modes of traveling: When asking about the modes of traveling,different people offer different opinions.Some people prefer traveling in team,but others disagree,they believe in traveling individually which is the best way. Both of the two modes have advantages and disadvantages.Traveling in a team may save you some money,besides you needn't consider much.For instance,when you start a journey,then how will you find a hotel,etc.All the preparation will be done by the travelling company.However,you may not have enough time to pay a visit.That's why some people choose traveling individually.Only in this way can you enjoy your journey.But you have to spend more money and have to pay attention on the preparation. As to me,I prefer traveling in a team.Since I am a student in a university,my daily expenses are mostly depended on my parents.What's more,I don't have enough time to thing of the preparation before traveling.So I hold the opinion that traveling in a team is a proper way for me.

hi! i'm a copyeditor and i edit manuscripts for grammar and style. if you want i can help you. *** Modes of traveling Different people offer different opinions when asked about the best way to travel. Some people prefer traveling with a team, while others believe that it is best to travel alone. Both of the two modes have advantages and disadvantages. Traveling with a team may save you some money and is easier to prepare for since you can ask a travel company to arrange things like when to start a trip, how to find a hotel, etc. However,you may not have enough time to stay in the places you choose to visit. That's why some people choose traveling individually. Only in this way can you enjoy your journey. But this would cost more money and you have to pay more attention on the preparation. As for me, I prefer traveling in a team. Since I am a student in a university, I am mostly dependent on my parents for my daily expenses. What's more,I don't have enough time to think of the preparation before traveling. So I hold the opinion that traveling in a team is the better way for me. *** if you have more problems, i'd be willing to help...:-)

hai ya i am so kind to correct my mistake in the compotion because i was working in the bpo center so i made more mistakes and my boss fire on me so i kindly correct my mistakes

i would definately help you if your discussion is small............. learn with sentence by sentence as it would be easy for both of us....hope to see your reply soon bye

Here's my opinion: When you travel individually you can explore more places and you can guide others. By the way being new i need friends can u help me.

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i think both ways have advantages and disadvantges myself i prefer travelling alone i feel more comfortable free

yeah,traveling in a team is funny!

Since I am a foreigner studying english,I hope you can give some advice to my composition.Words failed to express my thankfulness.When asking about the modes of traveling,different people offer different opinions.Some people prefer traveling in a team and others tend not to travel in a team believe that traveling alone is the best way.Both of the two options have it's own pros and cons.Traveling in a team may save you some money and you do not have to consider much.For instance,when do you start a journey,how to find a hotel,etc.All the preparation has been done by the traveling agency.However,you may not have enough time to visit each place.That's the reason why people choose to travel individually.As for me,I prefer traveling as a team.Since i am a student studying in an university,my daily expenses are mostly depended on my parents.What's more I don't have enough time to think about what i have to prepare before traveling.So,overall,I think that traveling as a team is a more suitable way for me.

well everyone has helped u in such a better way, i don't have 2 say anything.

I am also a foreigner, but i'll try to help you out: Modes of traveling: When asked about modes of traveling, different people offered different opinions.Some prefer traveling in a group, others believe in traveling individually to be the best way. Both of these modes have advantages and disadvantages.Traveling in a group may save you some money,besides you don't need to consider much.For instance; when to start a journey,how to find a hotel,etc. All the arrangements has been done by the travel agency.However,you may not have enough time to visita travel agent. That's why some people choose traveling individually.Only in this way you enjoy your journey but you have to spend more money and also have to pay attention on the preparation. As for me,I prefer traveling in a group.Since I am a student in a university,my daily expenses are mostly taken care by my parents.Furthermore,I don't have enough time to think of the arrangements before traveling.So I conclude that traveling in a group is a suitable way for me.

When asking about the modes of traveling, differet people offer different opinions. Some people prefer traveling in a team, but others disagree, and believe traveling individually is the best way. Both modes of travel have advantages and disadvantages. Traveling in a team may save you money, and you needn't consider as much, such as when to start a journey, how to find a hotel, etc. All the preparation has been done by the travelling company. However,you may not have enough time for visiting. That's why some people choose traveling individually, believing in this way can you enjoy your journey more. But you have to pay more money and pay more attention to the preparations. As for me, I prefer traveling in a team. Since I am a student in a university, my daily expenses are mostly dependent upon my parents. What's more, I don't have enough time to think of the preparation before traveling. So I hold the opinion that traveling in a team is the better way for me.

Your spelling needs some serious work. In fact, your spacing, spelling, and grammer all need a lot of work.

yes i can help you

Modes of traveling When asking about the modes of traveling, differet people offer different opinions.Some people prefer traveling in a team (groups_,but others disagree,they believe in traveling individually is (as) the best way. Both of the(ese)two modes have advantages and disadvantages. Traveling in a team may save you some money, besides you needn't consider much (This sentence does not really make sense). For instance, when to start a journey, how to find a hotel, etc. All the preparation has been done by the travelling company. However,you may not have enough time to pay a visit (This sentence does not really make sense). That's why some people choose traveling individually. Only in this way can you enjoy your journey. (Not a good sentence) But you have to cost more money and have to pay attention on the preparation. (Not a good sentence). As to me (replace with "Personally"),I prefer traveling in a team (as a group). Since (delete) I am a student in a (at) university and my daily expense(s) are mostly depended on my parents (carried by my parents). What's more, I don't have enough time to thingk (think) of the preparation before traveling.So I hold the opinion that traveling in a team (group) is a proper (more appropraite) way for me.

it may be just a typing error anyway your doing good in english composition.just continue posting ok.

Since I am a foreigner studying English, I would like some advice on my composition. Words fail to express my gratitude. Modes of Traveling When asked about the modes of traveling, different people will offer different opinions. Some people prefer traveling in a team, but others disagree, believing that traveling individually is the best way. Both of the two modes have advantages and disadvantages. Traveling in a team may save you some money, and you need not consider much. For instance, when to start a journey, how to find a hotel, etc. All the preparation has been done by the travelling company. However, you may not have enough time to pay a visit. That's why some people choose traveling individually. Only in this way can you enjoy your journey. But you have to spend more money and pay attention to the preparation. As for me, I prefer traveling in a team. Since I am a student in a university, my daily expenses depend mostly on my parents. What's more, I don't have enough time to think of the preparation before traveling. So I hold the opinion that traveling in a team is a proper way for me.