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Hey guys, what about write something here. Either you are a Pro writer or a novice one like me :D. I love to write poem -- although my ENGLISH is not good, Hhhmm, one of my poem which I posted in here: http://PrincessBugis.newnetfriends.com. This one gave an inspiration for the other member to proceed wtiting a book. I'm very glad that she is now busy working on her book. here is my Poem Mama Mama I miss you so much So much that it is really HURT! You've had gone to the place that is called ETERNITY A place that is called PARADISE At the time when we need you the most. Mama, please listen to my whisper..... I have suffered so much! So much that I almost END up mylife! AND it is really hurt... But your everlasting LOVE keep me goin' Mama, I'm no longer strong The way you used to see me The way you used to see me taken care of your other children I've had to struggle HARD to bring them up With so much sweat and pains To let them taste some sweetness .. that life could give I'm tired, mama I'm losing every ounce of my strength I can't see the path that I have walked on And the path that I'm walking on. I do not know where am I heading to? My eyes are always filled with tears My heart is always filled with sorrows Mama, sometimes I wish to be with you there But, you know what I'm carrying with my both weak hands Right now. This is more challenging than ever! mama I've got to be strong!... perhaps I simply try I've got to believe that I can make it I've got to hide behind that lovely mask To continue this unbearable... Journey of life. * MAMA.....MAMA.....MAMA Ok, please give me some discount should there be any gramatical mistakes. SMILE :D (although I'm sad)