How good of a poem can you write? This is Mine; now right yours.

@Zephory (176)
United States
December 27, 2006 1:07am CST
A Paradox For Venus: from the sahara sun to the windy Gobi nights~ the delicate body once a haven for curves and thighs silky hair, amber eyes is now aged and withered is it cruel for our giver to offer such a quick tatse of immortality?
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lena2000
@lena2000 (2392)
• Belgium
27 Dec 06
myself in solitude twilight counting for much delight reminicsing the yesterday's mem'ries of laughter and tears we fall so fast now where miles apart we had our love so strong but i don't know why it made wrong now am tired of loving where i always find my self hurting i'm so tiredof crying when someone comes along but then LEAVING.......
Zephory
@Zephory (176)
• United States
27 Dec 06
very nice....good job!
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lena2000
@lena2000 (2392)
• Belgium
27 Dec 06
thanks here is another one All my life I had built up a fantasy of the perfect Chevalier Countless romance stories and fantasies lingered. Walled off from emotions, numbed to dreams of bliss- Love Struck- A black and white fantasy Hidden in Shadows Within in the clouded mind I seek, I hope to find Wanting to be coloured- By a rainbow- My fantasy seeks the Illustrator- A Perfect World once scribbled down By the blunt pencil, Erased Forever- In One Glimpse-