Some Thoughts that crossed my mind...do comment if they r good....
By thundersam
@thundersam (77)
India
December 31, 2006 1:09am CST
n if not good do suggest how to improve them...n yea these are all my own compositions so here i go:
1. A day will pass n u will not know,
a nit will pass n u will not know.
But time has gone u will realize,
n u havnt done nything yet.
Next day u will cry,
next time u will try.
but mind will stop u yet again,
n u still didnt do it .
The Next day u will fly the next time u will die,
but ur will has won ur mind tday,
n u will do it, u will do it.
2.Thing are right , but time is not
N wen time is rit things r not
this contradiction cannot be argued,
but it is evidentlyexperienced n yet denied.
3.Assumptions without factual base have no recognition , meaning & understanding.
4.Living on the edge is an experiment that everyone should do 1ce in a lifetime,
1ce was not enough for me so i went for d whole life at the edge
adreline it has beyond imagination .
instances come for being sometimes beyond, sumtimes within this edge its thse instances dat make life exceptional.
5.comin to the level of those u meet for better rapport is not the real you,
and accepting people changin to ur tunes when they meet u for better understanding is still an fake show
a Common equilibrium shd be there between people no matter frens or not for the ultimate fun n njoyment dat every1 hopes for .thus achieves it.
If u like the 1's that i have put up here let me know i wil post more of my compositions in time...
Do comment i would lke to know wat are every1's views on my such short composes
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@siddhesh511 (190)
• India
31 Dec 06
hey wow!! you made this all by yourself??thats awesome!!at this rate you will become very famous on my lot!!by the way welcome to my lot!!there are just a few tips here and there but i wont post here for matters you know why..ok take care ..im postin it on okt okie.do chk em..take care..
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@thundersam (77)
• India
31 Dec 06
thx man if u liked my compositions then well i'll post in more as soon as i get a few more remarks....nyways thx for goin through them.
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