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Hi i started writing some small stuff some time back n i'd really like everyone's opinion on how they r....n if i shd improve them plz post ur suggestions...do note that these r all my own authentic composes. 1.A day will pass n u will not know, a nit will pass n u will not know. But time has gone u will realize, n u havnt done nything yet. Next day u will cry, next time u will try. but mind will stop u yet again, n u still didnt do it . The Next day u will fly the next time u will die, but ur will has won ur mind tday, n u will do it, u will do it. 2.life was slow- i was bored, life was normal- i was learning, life was over enthu- i was tired coping wid it. i met u n i appreciated life for the 1st time. 3.Thing are right , but time is not N wen time is rit things r not this contradiction cannot be argued, but it is evidentlyexperienced n yet denied. 4.Assumptions without factual base have no recognition , meaning & understanding. 5.comin to the level of those u meet for better rapport is not the real you, and accepting people changin to ur tunes when they meet u for better understanding is still an fake show a Common equilibrium shd be there between people no matter frens or not for the ultimate fun n njoyment dat every1 hopes for .thus achieves it. 6.unless u experience the worst u cant appreciate the best. i got dome more stuff written on my own lemme know if this stuff is good or if ny1 wud like to read more...:)