Poetry
United States
February 2, 2007 5:22pm CST
Im posting one of my poems that i wrote about a week aog.. i have been writing since i was 12 and hope to continue it as a career in college this fall
"Seasons"
Strength pours through my veins and soul
Magificent pleasure at a reachable goal
Haunting through my mind like the sun in mid july
Beyond the heavens i feel so high
Art thou beauty so devine and unique
A desirable being who i have always seeked
Like the winf creeping upon me as in autumn
You bring me joyce of which i have once forgotton
My breathe fades in every thought of you
Is this merely a dream or is this true
Dreams and inspirations are found with in me
My heart feels complete and i am set free
You are my seasons filled with grace and tranquility
The ashes of my once broken heart now repairs with in me
Suffering from anxiety of not being able to caress you
Endless nights of being alone i choose not to do
I foreseek the future and wonder where i am
What i am doing and who it is infront i stand
I know with my youth this is far too much
But every night i yurn for your touch
Submit your poems and let people know your talent and i hope you guys like mine
3 responses
@joey_matthews (8354)
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2 Feb 07
Hey,
I just wanted to say are you looking to recieve crits? I won't say anything but i do think it's not that bad.
I'll post one of mine sometime shortly. (if i remember)
~Joey
p.s if you'd like to recieve crits from a bunch of poets here a link for you. =)
www.poetryartonline.com/forum/index.php
kudos!
• United States
2 Feb 07
oh i wanst triyn to recieve crtis, i was jus psoting it so ppl could read it and share thiers as well
@roshnichaudhary (1160)
• United States
17 Feb 07
Hi this is a good poem . You should post in sites which is specially made for poets in this way no one can copy your poem. go to www.poetry.com
