What do you think about....
By jamie11982
@jamie11982 (1658)
United States
February 4, 2007 11:14am CST
This one poem that i wrote a few years ago. I'm trying to see what everyone thinks about my poems because i've got a ferw of them and if they are good enough then maybe i'll put them all together and try to get a book out of them. The only think that i can seem to right is love poems so please bear with me if you've read the other poem that i put up. Ok befor i write this one i want to warn everyone that i can't spell that good.
Dreams
You and I sitting together on a swing
We are swinging into the night
We are in each other's arems sitting by candle light.
Our love over came the fight
Our lonelieness forgoten
Our family merged into one
Happy is the word to explain the way we feel
The kids are gone and we talk of things we over came
Together we find the streangth
Streangth from each other as well as our selves
Love has leed the way
To this warm wonderful night
With no interuptions in site
We end this with falling asleep while in each other's arms
The swing still swinging in the summer breeze.
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