What do you think about Dreams
By jamie11982
@jamie11982 (1658)
United States
February 5, 2007 8:28pm CST
One day i got a little bored and this is what i wrote. It was a little inspried but i think that it works.
Dreams
You and I sitting together on a swing
We are swinging into the night
We are in each other's arems sitting by candle light.
Our love over came the fight
Our lonelieness forgoten
Our family merged into one
Happy is the word to explain the way we feel
The kids are gone and we talk of things we over came
Together we find the streangth
Streangth from each other as well as our selves
Love has leed the way
To this warm wonderful night
With no interuptions in site
We end this with falling asleep while in each other's arms
The swing still swinging in the summer breeze.
5 responses
@kerbausama (1335)
• Malaysia
6 Feb 07
thats ridiculous! i dont like it.it just part of life which not much different in daily life.
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@jamie11982 (1658)
• United States
9 Feb 07
this was created because it was something that i could have if only the other person wanted to share it with me. But that's the sad part about it. It was never to be with this man. He still houlds a part of my heart but it was never ment to come true. This dream was just that. A DREAM and not about every day life. there was more to it but i kinda eddited it out. I'm so sorry that you didn't like it.
@jinkson_unoh (186)
• Philippines
6 Feb 07
You have the talent in creating poems. I also create poems like you. As a matter of fact, I have volume of my own creations. For me dreams are barely beyond human imagination. These are hallucinations within us that occur whenever our body and mind systems are tired and restless. Dreams are very powerful that it can conquer our mind if you can't control it. It's an unexplain human thing :)
@firoafame (359)
• Thiruvananthapuram, India
6 Feb 07
dreams are something i see
i like it as it has no fee
i may be the king today
it may not be true everyday
i close my eyes and open my heart
i see a man and draw his chart
it may not last long
a breeze so strong
i love to dream
with an extra cream.
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