Exerpt from my current work. Please tell me what you think.

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With unmatched beauty and grace that can only come from the Asian culture, Mi Kyung trailed ahead touching every living thing with her shear presence. She was a queen of life that day, the Queen of Koko Crater. All eyes whether visible or unseen were on her; or at least my eyes. Her skirt whipped up around her legs blending into the wind. I couldn't tell where nature ended and she began. I longed to catch up and stroll beside her, but no man can; Mi Kyung walks with nature in its only true tangible form.