what do you think of this poem?
By broden
@broden (45)
Sweden
February 11, 2007 3:40pm CST
i am still thinking
about this crow
that with its pair of black scissors
by two brisk slashing sounds
cut an aslarc arc
on the matte paper of the sky
over the toasted wheat farms
of the yush valley
i am still thinking about this crow
that facing the nearby mountains
said something
with its lung's dry cawing
from the mountains echoed it,baffled,
for such a long time
in their rocky heads.
so, rating? :)
(the yush valley is in my hometown back in israel)
1 response
@wilson7634 (163)
• United States
11 Feb 07
there was alot of metaphor's and I thought they were good-I liked how descriptive it was. I don't write alot of poems with alot of simile's/metaphor's but I do like to read others' poems with these in it. makes you think about what your reading & makes you picture what the poem is describing.
