I'm putting a childish story here, read it and laugh;)!!!!!!

Thanks..... Don't be eager to read my story, it doesn't deserve that! Why I didn't post it is because I had to overcome the shame of putting a childish story lol. Anyway here it is... Seth Dhaniram was a kind-hearted merchant. He lived with his servant Ramu. Both of them liked each other very much. Ramu tried his best to please his master and Sethji too acknowledged it. Once Sethji was infected with Malaria and this disease changed him very much. He became very strung and foul-mouthed. All the doctors were forbidden to enter his home and he also didn't take the medicines.

Ramu tried hard to convince his master to take the medicine but failed. He was badly scolded. Later Sethji gave him some rupees and told to bring poision. Ramu was shocked and tried to argue but his master stopped him, saying " I don't want to live such a painful life. Better for you too, you'll get rid of all the abuses. Go!!" So Ramu went the shop to bring the poision. He was very sad and walking slowly...... Suddenly he saw something and his eyes started to shine with the joy.......

So that's the story. Sorry for spelling mistakes if any;) Thank you all for giving me the encouragement to represent myself. OK:)

Thanks for responding :) But I don't think you'd even see this lol Sorry if I misunderstand......

Thanks for the comments:) ... I don't know about the moral front, as I used to write as a child and all my stories are a child's fascination... but that doesn't mean I write immoral ones! :p Thanks for appreciating my avatar too:) This one too is my creation. I mean the animation.... this guy is not made by me

I too was much newer a member then and now I think maybe I got disappointed to early.... and I am so glad you appreciated it :) By the way, I am still much behind that milestone that's why I put it in short fragments (those days myLot did not allow me to write long posts and now I don't even dare to try that!) thanks again:)

Thank you so much for sharing this one *_* You must be using Firefox for it doesn't work on IE. I put this story here the same way you told me :) but hadn't ever calculated just how many words does it allow to copy/paste. You knew! Thanks for the comments and encouragements :) _____It is very useful thing, the one you shared.

you are a smart kid, my friend:) yep I'm using firefox indeed... and you are right internet explorer is not good at anything:P... except for seeing the rating... not very useful trough as foe the encouragements you are welcome;)... all the best:)