My attempt at romance writing

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This is my attempt at romance writing, I was with my Soon to be wife and her mother and sister and they were talking about Romance Novel and I just sputter out 'stuff' and they said you write it down!!! So here is mt attempt: Her skin was like moonlight, milky white and perfect, her was hair was the color red, like the fire the burned deep with-in her heart and her eyes were two green earth like orbs that could look deep in your soul. He held her with his strong arms, he would never let go. They look at the beach, the water lapping at the rocks and the salty wind blowing in there faces. The sun was setting, it made a beautiful glare on the water. Everything was perfect, even if it was only for a brief moment. It would seem like lifetimes for time stood still when they were together. The sun set and the moon was bight and the sky was littered with stars. They both looked at the moon, there was glowed in its light. They looked at each other with loving eyes and was soon locked in a kiss. There minds became one, ah did there souls and there bodies, they were no longer two humans but one beautiful entity of love, and that love would never break apart. I know it is not that good, but I took a wack at it? What do you think? Thanks for you responses.