do you love writing poetry?
By djmarion
@djmarion (4898)
Philippines
6 responses
@noah2413 (404)
• United States
19 Feb 07
Here's a poem i wrote, what do you think?
Midnight
Lying there,
on the comforter,
staring up,
at the cieling.
Wondering what goes on,
away from
my peaceful sanctuary,
during,
the black hours of midnight.
Do People walk,
the lamp-lit streets,
in search
of something to do?
Walking from,
place-to-place,
not making up their mind.
Plz critique!
@djmarion (4898)
• Philippines
20 Feb 07
its a good poem, i think you got the talent you just have to polish it a little, your poem is good and if you can make it a bit longer so as t express clearly your thoughts then it would be better....constructive critism --- just replace the line Black hours of midnight - cause night is already black... :) hope you are not offended.... PEACE.
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@a_robinnep (529)
• Nepal
19 Feb 07
Yes, i love to write poetry in school life i am participating in poetry competation. I think poetry writing is developed your creativity.