A proud mother
By mrbranan
@mrbranan (1012)
United States
March 8, 2007 5:58pm CST
About two years ago my bother reinlisted in the service for another four years. We all wanted him to come home but he said he still had work to do.My daughter was 13 at the time and wrote this for him.
911
The day seemed prefect not a cloud in sight
But ended up the most sleepless night
Friends and families were sadly lost
If we had just known what our freedom cost
America the beautiful was turned to dust
Becaouse of the man dreadful lust
His plan to destroy America flesh
which was only a simple test
He tested our men he tested our hearts
To see if America would fall apart
His plan to destroy went deadly wrong
It just made America even more wrong
Tell me what you think
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3 responses
@samtaylorskykierajen (7977)
• Canada
9 Mar 07
Wow she did an amazing job on that and I can see why you are so proud of her . I don't know that I could have wrote anything that good and the fact that she did this at the age of 13 says a lot about her . She has a really good job of becoming someone who can really write if that is what she chooses to do in life as she wrote that beautifully about something so tragic and yet it brings meaning to what she was trying to say .
I can't even say how well I think she wrote that as she can write better then me :)
