Let Me Love You ( My first Attempt)
By deehan
@deehan (119)
Pakistan
March 16, 2007 1:46am CST
I need your comments on my this poem.
Let me love you
Give me a chance
And don't argue
Let me love you
You are above, I know
I am below, I know
Even then I love you
Let me love you
You are in my hand
Why don't you understand.
You for me and I for you
Let me love you.
Against my power of passion
Useless is your oppression
I have CHOSEN you
Let me love you.
Pleas point out my deficiencies and and qualities as well
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2 responses
@lani0529 (1722)
• Philippines
16 Mar 07
Hello deehan!(",) Welcome to mylot! I hope you'll start to join and answer some of the discussions. Did you write that poem? It's lovely. You are good at it. I also have a poem posted in my discussion entitled "What You Are to Me". I didn't write it but, I do hope you'll check it out. Continue writing more poems and hope that you will find the love of your life! Enjoy your time here in mylot!
