What's your interpretation with this article?
@pretty_lady_venus (34)
Philippines
March 31, 2007 4:57am CST
Here's an article I wrote a few months ago. I've heard a lot of interpretations with this one and everbody had their own. Can you make one so that i know what to improve next time i write. Thanks!
Drifting
by Jia Raneses
Days had passed but nothing seem to make me forget that very day... the day when I saw nothing but sand. The River who once flowed with my whole life had gone dry, leaving me alone in the midst of the desert.
From planks, Mother Nature turned me into a boat so I could explore new horizons, As i went on with my voyage and hurdle lots of obstacles, I became stronger.
One day, I heard the flow of melifluous water which was the River, luring me to sail into its direction. Scared of its currents, I tried to get away."Don't be afraid..." cried the River as he tries to calm his current, "I shall keep you safe. I'll carry you to a place where happiness shall fill you. Let my waters bring you peace.""But how true are your words? We both knonw that at the end, is a great fall. If I sail your waters, will the wind stay serene? Will the waters stay calm?""Mark my words beloved... let this glass be the sign of my promise."Trusting his kind words, I let him bring into his depths. At first serene. But then the currents slowly rose faster and faster as the great waterfall came in sight. The once sweet melodious tune of the current was now the thundering drums, beating painfully at my body. I pleaded to the River, But Alas! He became deaf to my woes!
Nearing the edge, I continue to wrestle with the strong currents as my body hold on to the piece of glass. It was the moment of decision. Will I let go of the promise or will I hold on? The River has become the essence of my journey... I cannot leave him now!I fell freely into his depths with his promise I once believed in. He said he'd catch me, and now I'm falling... And BANG!I'm nothing now, ebbing in the Lake. The shards of broken glass pierce in the core of my existence...
...as the journey ends...
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