Are you a natural poet? Can you make a poem just out of the blue
By lonewoulfe
@lonewoulfe (585)
Philippines
March 31, 2007 2:50pm CST
Surely some of us would like to think we are. Heres your chance. Make your own original poem. What inspires you for that poem? What is its essence.
Amateurs only please :-)
Just a Blink Out of the blue
Just a blink out of the blue
Allow me so, before i say adieu
Lovely words we make, Lonely ears dont wake
MyLot choose me not, My heart aches a lot
Hear words delivered on winds, Read afew viewed on closed eyes
Nay, lo what words to say i thought them no more
Wonder i feel, senses dont come as reel to give me more.
Behold ! Behold ! A treasure i found mine to write down
Posts i have to make, discussion i have search
Earnings to feed my dreams for riches
Treasures i found in friends that have me bound,
On wisdom at every discussion abound.
....just part of my "not to get bored ritual"
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5 responses
@sumofalltears (3988)
• United States
1 Apr 07
ok here is one for you
Whispers in the Wind
I hear music in the air
so softly it almost isn't there,
is it part of the everyday din,
or is it echos from within,
like whispers in the wind.
I hear a woman crying,
she sounds as if she may be dying,
is it because she played and din't win,
so she dispiars from within,
making whispers in the wind.
I hear a man groaning,
it sounds like he is mourning,
for a life wasted in sin,
so he hurts from within,
making whispers in the wind.
I feel the wind in my face,
and I wonder to what place,
it will carry the emotional din,
of errant tides within,
all those whispers in the wind.
@lonewoulfe (585)
• Philippines
1 Apr 07
Wooot !! *clap*clap*
I like it. There's obviously some poet in there.
Thanks. There are emotions there, i thinks its sad & lonely.
Thanks.
@sumofalltears (3988)
• United States
2 Apr 07
Thanks for the best response vote..I appreciate it...:}
@myworld_and_you (1223)
• Philippines
1 Apr 07
I love to write but poetry is not really my passion. I do have written some poems but I'm not the kind of poet who just can make poems out of the blue. I always need more time to be able to make such. ANd I hope you won't rate me negatively if I don't have any poem to post in here. :)
@lonewoulfe (585)
• Philippines
1 Apr 07
Oh its ok, ive always rated everyone positively, unless its a wanton disrespect & blatant use of forsaken words.
you should give it a try, maybe at least a 5 liner. You never know, your a poet waiting to be waken.
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@Perry2007 (2229)
• Philippines
1 Apr 07
cool, this is a great release of someone bored. Let me see if I can form something out of the blues.
Out of the blues
you gave me a clue
Just allow some release
this bored feeling needs some ease.
There you go, hope its good enough, Have a great holy week
@lonewoulfe (585)
• Philippines
1 Apr 07
Thanks. Its a bit colorful now, i guess, out of the blue indeed.
Thanks.
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@nowment (1757)
• United States
10 Apr 07
I like limericks,
but this is an interesting idea.
Rainbows Promises
On a day oh so sad,
my mother said time to be glad
I could see the rain and I wanted to play
and she said not to worry the rain won't stay
Look up to the sky and see the promise from the rain
that the sun will shine brightly again
for each and every time the rainbow shines
it is a promise from the Divine
The promises of life, growth, and joys
to of the worlds girls and boys
For when you see the colors of the rainbow
you see all the colors of worlds glow
The rainbows promises to us all
that we can always find sunshine after the rain fall
@lonewoulfe (585)
• Philippines
1 Apr 07
Then make a love poem here. Let the poet in you come out. Let the gurls bedazzled by your words of love.
Thanks.
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