A poem I wrote in tribute to my son

It's just so sweet. indeed it's a nice poem specially when it is written by a parent. but you know what, a parent can never express his feelings about the child. no matter how skillfully you articulte the excellently selected words, you will never be able to express even a fraction of you feelings about your son. I have a son. he is just 2 months old. i have been doing poetry and oratory in my past life but I know myself that whatever i say or write can't even describe the feeling when i just pass by him. his presence around me gives a scent of life, energy, happiness, accomplishement, and motivation to live and go on top. I wish you and your son every hapiness and a purposeful life.

great:-) You touched my heart. I feel so good about your son that he has such mother. I don't have a kid of my own yet... may be when it's right time. i'll read my son this when he will be in this world;-)

I have to agree with the other poster. There is nothing like our kids. However, your attempt to convey the intensity of your feelings is very lovely. Awesome as always girl!

That was great! :)

I read your poem with great interest as I have two sons. I can remember feeling exactly as you say in your poem when they were small and I can truthfully say that those feelings stay for ever even when they are grown men, your childfren always fill you with pride.