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By A B
Scottsdale, Arizona
April 9, 2007 11:02am CST
All alone, waitin for an open door. Waitin for a ray, which will make my day. Need for love nd care, which seems quite meer. Ppl all around, but wid dem am i bound??? To dis day do i stand, to make a remark by my hand, so as to who am i? where am i from?? Shuld i ask all dis from my mom??? Was i born jus to share my worth, worth ??? or short-lived birth??? The questions remain , d answers refrain, we all remain, Time doesnt remain...
1 response
Khyatii
@Khyatii (237)
• United States
9 Apr 07
nice poem who wrote it?
A B
@abhiroop85 (2826)
• Scottsdale, Arizona
9 Apr 07
well she is a friend of mine,just 17 years old,she wrote it of her own,this one was her first ever poem,i thought why not to share it witjh all here in mylot.thank you i will tell her that you liked it.
Khyatii
@Khyatii (237)
• United States
9 Apr 07
tell her to keep writing..things like that help her and others too
A B
@abhiroop85 (2826)
• Scottsdale, Arizona
11 Apr 07
ok,i am saying thank you from her part, i told her from your part,she thanked you. thank you for your response.have a good day and best of luck