2nd poem
By A B
@abhiroop85 (2826)
Scottsdale, Arizona
April 9, 2007 11:10am CST
Peoplewid sleep masks,
ppl waitin for d larks...
Ppl happy seein their beloveds,
ppl dyin to see their beloveds,
Dont u think both r in dark masks??
There isnt anythin as such as sleep,
rather hav a thinkin dats very deep,
deep wid d desires to peep,
into d maks of ur beloveds sleep.
And im sure u soon will b lost in dat very deep,
havin bein put to sleep...
3 responses
@sonukuldeep (669)
• India
10 Apr 07
i like this poem. i hope u write it in complete words it may take some time but its more fun to read. i think u are a poem lover similar to me.
@abhiroop85 (2826)
• Scottsdale, Arizona
11 Apr 07
ok i am sorry for that i just wanted to finish it up quickly,i will try to remember your suggestion in future,thank you for your response.
@abhiroop85 (2826)
• Scottsdale, Arizona
11 Apr 07
oh!!!! thank you very much. i would tell her ,she is my friend that you people really liked her poems and encouraged to write more.thank you
@abhiroop85 (2826)
• Scottsdale, Arizona
11 Apr 07
yes she wrote this one also,this one is her second ever poem,i also thought it is good,so just submitted here to get comments from you.thank you for your response.
