What do you think about this? It's my creation, but i also find it hard to under

Actually, I understood it perfectly...but as it stands, it's a terrible piece of writing. I understand the whole concept of perception and how others see your actions but you see your reasons behind your actions. If you want to see yourself as others see you, then you should look at your own actions in the abstract. That is actually very enlightening and I like it. But you should write more, add to it. Go about it a different way even. Maybe you should have written it in your own language. You can then have someone who is knowledgeable about such things translate it properly. But as a piece of literature, I'm sorry to say it's terrible. As a lesson and a sentiment and a...feeling, I think it's wonderful. Ra http://www.myspace.com/rapoetic http://rapoetics.blogspot.com/