danzabelleza

@danzabelleza (116)

United States • Age 36

Joined myLot 18 years ago

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IMPORTANT short story I need help re-writing and proofread!

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

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Uncle Jay, Finding More Value in Your Machine @danzabelleza Is it more from the dream, or additional actions and dreams you've had since then?

19 Dec 14

IMPORTANT short story I need help re-writing and proofread!

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

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1 person

dpk262006 @danzabelleza - All the best to you. Hope you will come to mylot occasionally to join us.

19 Dec 14

ALL about Writing, Proofreading! Checking For Errors! I need HELP!

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 17 Dec 14

I wrote up a paragraph or you might call it a short story and I need help in checking for errors and making it sound better. Please let me know if you could help me. This is not for school, it's for personal use...something I...

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Zackbigwhite @danzabelleza The story touched my heart. My Grandpa is more than 90 year old now , living with my father and I. He is like a 6-7 years kid due to Old enough. My Grandmon left us alone, and has been kidnapped by another relatives- her elder brother. Yep ,...

18 Dec 14

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ALL about Writing, Proofreading! Checking For Errors! I need HELP!

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 17 Dec 14

I wrote up a paragraph or you might call it a short story and I need help in checking for errors and making it sound better. Please let me know if you could help me. This is not for school, it's for personal use...something I...

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Zackbigwhite @danzabelleza The story touched my heart. My Grandpa is more than 90 year old now , living with my father and I. He is like a 6-7 years kid due to Old enough. My Grandmon left us alone, and has been kidnapped by another relatives- her elder brother. Yep ,...

18 Dec 14

IMPORTANT short story I need help re-writing and proofread!

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

3 responses •

1 person

dpk262006 @danzabelleza - All the best to you.

17 Dec 14

IMPORTANT short story I need help re-writing and proofread!

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

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1 person

Uncle Jay, Finding More Value in Your Machine @danzabelleza That's wonderful. But I want to explore something; Are you and your mother (& grandmother) on good terms now? Were you back then?

17 Dec 14