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danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

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danzabelleza @dpk262006 I found the best website! I just kept on looking around and it's perfect for what I need! It's called writing.com!

18 Dec 14

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danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 17 Dec 14

I wrote up a paragraph or you might call it a short story and I need help in checking for errors and making it sound better. Please let me know if you could help me. This is not for school, it's for personal use...something I...

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danzabelleza Okay here it is... Seven years ago today I had a dream about Grandpa. I wrote it up real quick the next day. and it's been left untouched since. I've been working on it for a couple of days, did a lot of revising. I added to it and got a little help with...

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danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

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danzabelleza And if you want I've added to my story since then, let me know if you want to read it. I still got to go through and check for errors and change some sentences up.

17 Dec 14

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

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danzabelleza Yes we were always on good terms and we still are!

17 Dec 14

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

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danzabelleza I have looked everywhere. I can't find anything, it's hard to come by. I haven't been on here in over seven years, so I thought I would give it a try and see if I could get some help. Right now I am working on it on my own.

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danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

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danzabelleza I don't understand what your trying to say? Please explain!

16 Dec 14

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Dec 14

I wrote this a while back in 2007. It's about a bad dream I had and I'm thinking about sharing it with my family. I wrote it in a hurry and I read it and don't like the way it sounds. I want it to be interesting and corrected...

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danzabelleza Wow, you just went over the top by looking into every single detail for me and fixing and proofreading my paragraph. Thank you so much for your time. You really helped out a lot. My Grandpa passed away almost 10 years ago on December 23 just right before...

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danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 31 May 08

Well I have an apple macbook. I would like to know how to upload a video to youtube. Please give me all the steps to this. By the way when I try to upload one I click upload and it takes forever and it does not upload.

videos

youtube

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danzabelleza Well I have an apple macbook. I am trying to upload videos from my computer. I have been a member with youtube for quite a while. So I know all about youtube. Thanks for that information anyways!! When I click upload video it comes up and where I need to...

31 May 08

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Mar 08

I am 19 years old. July 4 will be four years I have been with my fiance. I am a virgin and my fiance is 27 years old. I decided to wait till marriage. Has been in my plans since I was very young. I would love to spend the rest of...

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danzabelleza oh and i forgot to add. well most of you are saying im gong to miss out on the world. well i am not going to have a baby right off i will give that some time. i notice alot of you say that i will miss out on my 21 birthday. and parties and all that stuff. well...

17 Mar 08

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Mar 08

I am 19 years old. July 4 will be four years I have been with my fiance. I am a virgin and my fiance is 27 years old. I decided to wait till marriage. Has been in my plans since I was very young. I would love to spend the rest of...

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danzabelleza to all of you, first of all i want to thank you for your help! but really my question was tips on how to plan a wedding and where to start. i noticed that most people answered on whether or not i should get married. but i know for a fact i am getting...

17 Mar 08

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 14 Mar 08

just would like to know how old everyone was when they get married. or perhaps how old would you like to get married?

age

love

marriage

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danzabelleza Well I posted another question would you be so kind and respond? Thank you!

14 Mar 08

maddysmommy @maddysmommy (16230) • United States 15 Dec 07

Are there any particular movies you watch over and over and over again? I think this is the 5th time I have watched the Lord of the Rings Trilogy. It's been on tv twice so far and I have watched them both times. I have also seen...

lord of the rings trilogy

movies

watching them over again

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danzabelleza So have you seen Folks yet?

28 Dec 07

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danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 27 Dec 07

Well I love pancakes in the morning. First I spread butter on top. Then spread peanut butter all over. Finally I pour lots of syrup so it won't be dry. Does anyone else eat there pancakes this way. If you have different ideas...

food

pancakes

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danzabelleza Wow I have never heard of all that before. I guess I better try it some time!

28 Dec 07

rumahpohon @rumahpohon (2) • Indonesia 17 Dec 07

2007 will end in a few day..2008 will coming on..sure we have a much of dreams there...tommorrow.. so.. whats your dreams on 2008? n how u get the dreams come true?

2008

dream

new years

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danzabelleza Let me know when you open your buisness. So I can buy some things from you.

17 Dec 07

maddysmommy @maddysmommy (16230) • United States 15 Dec 07

Are there any particular movies you watch over and over and over again? I think this is the 5th time I have watched the Lord of the Rings Trilogy. It's been on tv twice so far and I have watched them both times. I have also seen...

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danzabelleza Folks is about and elderly man who loses his memory. It is just so funny I laugh everytime. Well I would tell you more about it but I would spoil it for you. You should go and rent the movie. And tell me if you liked it. What do you think?

16 Dec 07

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danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 16 Dec 07

I Love Lucy is like my favorite t.v show ever. It is so funny. Lucy is such a character. She cracks me up so much. Well I love all the episodes. Lucy and Ricky remind me so much of me and my boyfriend. He is mexican and I am...

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danzabelleza If you want to have a good time. You should go back and watch some more. It is so funny.

16 Dec 07

danzabelleza @danzabelleza (116) • United States 15 Dec 07

movies. Some of my favorite movies are: HomeAlone,Folks,HappyFeet,TheNotebook,InspectorGadget,FantasticFour,BicentinealMan,Matilda,Mrs.Doubtfire. And many more I have so many favorite movies. I can't even list all of them. Well...

favorite

movies

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danzabelleza I havent' ever seen any of those movies. Actually Lilo And Stitch I love that movie. The first one is better than all the others. But talking about cartoon movies. I like Aladin, The Iron Giant, All Dogs Go To Heaven, The Brave Little Toaster, and much more.

15 Dec 07

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