Melodious Mind

@MelodiousMind (5)

India

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Do you agree to this description of something strong?

Melodious Mind @MelodiousMind (5) • India 22 Oct 15

Strong is to feel the urge to be free, it is to break up the mess and stand out as a tree, it is the red burning marks left after his grip on her arms, it is the taste of unfaithfulness on his lips, it is the shock of her...

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Melodious Mind @destry ohh!! no .. I think I should make it more understandable. It is not a good idea to lose readers. Anyways, Thank you for your comment. :)

22 Oct 15

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Do you agree to this description of something strong?

Melodious Mind @MelodiousMind (5) • India 22 Oct 15

Strong is to feel the urge to be free, it is to break up the mess and stand out as a tree, it is the red burning marks left after his grip on her arms, it is the taste of unfaithfulness on his lips, it is the shock of her...

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Melodious Mind @destry Actually I took mice here as the smallest element. So that the mentioned soul would then suffocate in the smallest of the smallest corner in his mind or heart and then eventually understand his eternal peace lies in his freedom.

22 Oct 15

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Do you agree to this description of something strong?

Melodious Mind @MelodiousMind (5) • India 22 Oct 15

Strong is to feel the urge to be free, it is to break up the mess and stand out as a tree, it is the red burning marks left after his grip on her arms, it is the taste of unfaithfulness on his lips, it is the shock of her...

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Melodious Mind Sorry, I would work on it more for clearer and crispier understanding. Thank you for your review. :D

22 Oct 15

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