Rain and my love

@tarachand (3895)
India
June 23, 2007 1:20pm CST
I am copy pasting my response to a discussion with slight changes. QUOTE: ------------------- Drops, dropping drops, water down my clothes does drip, Nice and chilling, one stream through me clothes flows past my hip. Another and then another and spread it does, all over even past my groin, Getting wetter and wetter, my walk I kept going Thunder and lightening, flashes and roar of the wind A natural disco, a natural dance floor saith my mind. And then came crashing the memories of youth, of fun of cheer ..... Of loss, of the girl I lost, the one I held so dear. The pain, the sorrow as I beheld her mangled form splayed And wanted to smash the evil face of the drunken driver so dismayed. Would I ever love again, would I ever have the same feeling, Like the ones I did when I made love to my lost love? How could I ever control my raving mind's screaming? Life to me then it seemed to me was all push and shove! My life it was a mess, and then after a couple of years I did transgress, And did chase and charm to conquer, I confess. No,I couldn't feel anything, nothing at all, the pain of loss so intense, Yet continue to philander did I, though I knew it made no sense. Until another early rain in spring, well, actually a thundershower, I met her, and wooed her and her I tried with my charm to overpower. She told me and showed me my true face then in a mirror so real, My true face so ghastly, so ghostly, so ghoulish, so surreal! Ashamed was I, how, when, why did I lose myself, my humanity? Gentle and understanding was she and became my wife, Retaught me and helped me, I say with all humility. And brought me all the joys and pleasures that make up our life!
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• United States
23 Jun 07
Nice, sad and nice... Is this true?
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@tarachand (3895)
• India
23 Jun 07
What do you think? Thanks indeed for responding!
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• United States
24 Jun 07
I think this is a reflection of your life, a truth from your youth, your heart in the right place, I've never questioned what you write as to the world and how you see it. This moved me to read your story thank you for sharing, your wife is a very lucky lady to have shown you what you were and what you could be. You have much to be thankful for. Sincerely, Gary
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@tarachand (3895)
• India
24 Jun 07
I think I am the luckier one and am ever thankful for the second chance to love. Thank you for your kind words!
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
25 Jun 07
Long live your Love! That was an awesome tribute to your beloved one. You regained your paradise, I presume. Thank you, I have noticed and compared the changes, which made it more rhythmic.
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@tarachand (3895)
• India
25 Jun 07
Thanks for your response, yes it was your discussion that I'd copy pasted my own response from as a part of this discussion. I am sorry that I forgot to mention the link above, but will remedy that immediately by pasting it here: http://www.mylot.com/w/discussions/1123669.aspx ------------------------------------------- I have accepted you as a friend, my friend.
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@sreevasu (2717)
• India
25 Jun 07
P.s. I wonder, why I forgot to send you a friend's request!!??
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@Lydia1901 (16351)
• United States
28 Jun 07
That sounds really beautiful and I like it alot. Thank you for sharing this, it is a great poem to me.
@tarachand (3895)
• India
10 Jan 08
I know its rather late - but thanks for your response!
@singlemommy (2955)
• United States
27 Jul 08
That is such a beautiful poem. You are very, very talented! I could feel your pain and your joy. Thank you so much for sharing it with me. It was wonderful! I loved it! Keep up the great work! Happy MyLotting!
@tarachand (3895)
• India
28 Jul 08
Thank you for your response and your words of praise! Happy mylotting to you too! let me share my favorite alliteration that has been coined by yours truly: Life's Lovely! Love & LIve Life! Live & Let Live!