Please rate my poem

Very nicely done & a great point. 2 Thumbs up.

I think the poem is absolutely beautiful. It is very well written and completely understandable. I find it very hard to understand most poetry. But this is exceptionally beautiful.

Wow! u sure write very well.the poem is more like a song.its very lovely and philosophic.keep it up and post more dear.

That's a very nice poem. You have the talent:) I am so surprised that you published your poem before. That's a great honor:)

This is a good poem. It tells us to live for the day for it might passed as by. The good Lord is always with us in everything we do so just live by the day and enjoy. Be thankful too.

What a blessing! Thank you for sharing this with us! It really touched my heart.

Your poem has definitely such a wonderful melodic ring to it, the words just flowing. Not to mention that the message holds so much truth to it. Thank you for sharing it. Might I also invite you to a wonderful online writing community site? So you can also post your poetry there, and even meet up with other writers, get critiques and maybe even get ideas and resources as to how to get your work published in the future? It's http://www.onestopwriteshop.com --hope to see you there pose! btw, I also have the same username there =)

Hi Pose123 your poem is very straight and to the point. There are no tomorrows just todays yet to come, this day and age is far too fast and we sometimes get weighed down with troubles and woes we should savour every day as if it is our last, to son will come the day it will be. keep writing tc

It is pretty good. Oh "I failed to see of any gain" might be better rendered as "I failed to see there any gain." You could also insert an "and" between "Worry" and "greed" That is all I could think of, but if it were published, I guess they did not mind. Oh did you get paid for it?

Wonderful poetic expression, very heart felt...

Hi Pose123! That is a very beautiful poem! It is simple yet so rich in meanings. I do love it and somehow it made me realize that we are constantly worrying and just letting the day pass us by. I have always kept in mind that each morning, as I wake up I will always paused from my busy schedule to stop and smell the roses and be thankful for a brand new day ...for the first few hours I constantly remind myself and then by midday, I am already lost with all the worries and burden of all the todays and the tomorrows and the yesterdays.LOL! Just my thoughts and I think I will rate your poem with a rating higher than 10! Wow! I simply like it my friend! Take care and have a nice day! :)

That is really good, Pose.. So who publish the poem for you? My daughter write poetry and she shared her poem the other night at the Watch and everyone loved it..

Like it, thought it's not my favorite style of writing. Congrats on publishing it and good luck getting good reviews.

Your poem has excellent visual effect using words. I could see the people looking disappointed, and I could feel the pain and sadness. The main thing I got from the poem was that the one who is having these thoughts (the main character) is looking for something and seeking happiness. The friend then tells him to live just for today. You've probably heard the saying, "Yesterday is history; tomorrow is unpromised. Today is a gift; that's why it's called the 'present'." This quote is so true because we never know if tomorrow will come or what tomorrow will bring. We have to enjoy today like it's our last day. "Live life to the fullest!" Never do anything you would regret, but never fail to do something because you're afraid. If it's something you truly want to do, have the experience or you'll regret not doing so. The gift of being able to write and communicate through writings is a gift and treasure. Hold onto it! You have great potential. This is a great site for you!!

If you are not a regular writer of poems, then this shows the great talent that you have and it could not remain hidden for long! Simply great! Continue, please and write here also. All the best to you.

quite inspiring and full of hope but lacking arrogance

I think you have expressed what a lot of people feel as they observe the lack of concern for life in the animal kingdom. They are focused in the NOW of their experience and your poem is an eloquent reminder of that fact. Good job Pose...keep on writing...you have much to offer. Raia

Hi posed, Its a good poem. You have very good qualty of poet in your self. Your poem is simply touching to heart and is so simple to understand. Congartulations for your early publishing of this poem. Pls continue and have new poems from your heart which can reach to heart of every reader.

It was really very, very, very nice my friend.I think u have tried to show the reality of each and every one of our lives.Thank's a lot for starting this discussions and sharing ur poem with all of us. Just keep it up my friend

blue,sentimental,but i like such kind of feeling